Draft

Genre Expectations - The genre is structured as belonging to a certain category with characteristics appropriate to the genre.

Meeting Audience Information Needs - The Genre is designed with the information needs and interests of a general audience.

Genre Purpose - The Purpose of the communication is mentioned.

Key Messages (Points or ideas to support) - Several points that support the writer's purpose are presented accurately and objectively.

Citations - Missing

Grammar and Punctuation - There are few errors.

Some of the revisions that I will have to make to achieve a final product would be to revise each of the slides to replace the placeholder text with some visuals and text that help support the narration that is occuring over each of the slides. I will also need to input citations for the images and sources that I will be talking about. Lastly, I will need to actually put in the narration to tie everything together and then edit it and upload to youtube. From the peer review, some things that I will put in is a slide about my personal involvement in the matter.

For this, I will probably spend a minute or so talking about mining, perhaps tied into the mining slide, and mention that I have significant holdings in crypto. I also need to add some more information to the slides such as sources for each of the non-general images, and adding more text information to further back up my claims that I am making.