Every finished piece of writing passes through four stages:
Sure, you can publish a blog post without doing any planning, or any rewriting and editing. Unless you’re very lucky, though (or writing something extremely short), you’ll be lacking a clear focus, the structure won’t quite work, and there’ll be clumsy sentences all over the place.
I wouldn't call that “finished”, myself. I’d call it a draft.
The four stages don’t always have to be tackled in order. Sometimes, you’ll find that they can be combined – rewriting and editing, for instance. They don’t even have to be carried out by the same person. (I've written blog posts to other people’s plans, and I’ve had my work edited by others.)
But it’s crucial to be clear about what each stage involves. If you’re struggling with a particular piece of writing, there’s a good chance that you’ve skipped a step somewhere – or that you’ve tried to do everything at once.
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You’re already planning your writing – whether or not you realise it. You might not be creating an outline, but you’re thinking through what you want to say. If you have a brilliant idea for a blog post while you’re in the shower, and mull it over as you drive to work, that’s a form of planning.
Some written pieces don’t need any more planning than that: you’ve got the idea in your head, pretty much complete. Anything lengthy, though, will benefit hugely from a written plan.
When you’re working on a project where you already know the subject matter – an ebook, for instance, or a memoir – then it’s worth planning in some detail. You can use mindmaps to generate and sift ideas, and construct a more linear outline as you start to shape your material.
When the process of writing is more of an exploration – I’m thinking primarily of fiction here – then it’s not necessary to plan in detail. You’ll want to get some basics clear, though: your concept or theme, your main characters, and the ending. You’ll probably also have some thoughts about key scenes or chapters that’ll be included along the way.
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When we talk about “writing”, we often mean “drafting”. We imagine sitting down at the keyboard, opening up a blank document, and typing away, filling the screen with exactly what we want to say, expressed clearly and cleverly.
And maybe, once in a while, that actually happens. But my first drafts rarely look anything like that. And I’d guess yours don’t either.
It’s almost impossible to get a piece of writing just right during the first draft. Rather than aiming for perfection, aim for completion. Your goal when you write is to keep putting one word after another, building up sentences, paragraphs, pages…
Not all those words will be quite right. At this stage of the process, you’ll have a mixture of problems, from the structure of the whole piece right down to the individual words that you choose.
None of this is bad. This is just the nature of first drafts. You’re shaping your material and forming your ideas as you go along – and of course it won’t always come out perfectly.
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This is the stage which newer writers often skip – but it’s just as important a part of writing as the first draft stage.
Redrafting or rewriting is when you take what you’ve written and rework it. That doesn’t mean checking for typos, or tidying up a few sentences. It usually involves big-picture, structural change like:
It’s not unusual for novelists to cut out whole characters and subplots at this stage. Sometimes, what seemed like a great idea during planning and drafting just doesn’t quite work out.
To redraft, you need to get some distance on your work. That might mean putting it aside for a few months (I’ve just started on draft four of my novel, after a two month break), or it might mean getting feedback from other people.
Some writers find that they actually enjoy the redrafting stage more than drafting. It’s a different form of creativity – you’re able to work with what’s already there, shaping and honing it.
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This stage often gets muddled up with redrafting. For a short piece – like a blog post or a poem – you might not need to do much redrafting or editing, and you can combine them effectively. For anything longer, though – an ebook, say, or a short story – you’ll want to edit after you’ve redrafted.
Your redraft will have fixed many of the first draft’s problems. Your sections will be in the right order. You’ll have cut out anything irrelevant. You’ll have added new material where it’s needed.
But, even after redrafting, your piece isn’t finished. There’ll still be some awkward sentences and, inevitably, some typos.
Editing means going through your piece line by line and looking for things like:
That isn’t a comprehensive checklist, of course – but it gives you some idea of what editing involves. With some forms of writing, particular for the internet, you may also find yourself putting in formatting (bold text, subheadings, etc) during the editing stage.
For many writers, including me, editing is the most frustrating stage. If what you really love is the fast-paced writing of draft one, or the freewheeling inspiration of planning, then editing can seem slow and tedious.
It’s important, though – and there’s a certain pleasure in getting things right. You could have written a brilliant piece but if it’s riddled with poor grammar and silly typos, readers may not make it past the first page.
Which stage of writing comes easiest for you? Which is your weakest? How could you improve?