Below are examples of excellent past students' Personal Project reports from TKS (except the 2022 sample). At the bottom there are IB samples + rubrics with comments to explain the marks each sample was given.
This student received an overall 7. This student received a perfect grade for Criterion C (Reflection). Criteria A grade was a 6.
This student received an overall 7. This student received a perfect grade for Criterion B (ATL skills)
This student received an overall 7
This student received an overall 7
This student received an overall 7
This sample shows alternative to the templates you have been given but is an excellent example.