Good work!
This is a weak paper.
Good work! Your use of words was more precise in this paper than in the last one, and I saw the scenes clearly in my mind's eye.
This is a weak paper. Almost from the first sentence, I was confused as to your initial thesis and the evidence you provide for it. In the second paragraph, you propose a different thesis, and in the third paragraph, you don't offer evidence, just beliefs.
Each paragraph should have one main idea, and that idea goes in the topic sentence.
Your details strongly support your claim that we should recycle news papers. That’s great. Where did you find all those facts?
This report probably wouldn’t convince a reader who didn’t already agree we should recycle. What else could you do to make a more convincing argument?
This report probably wouldn’t convince a reader who didn’t already agree we should recycle. I would want to know more about the effects on the environment and the cost of recycling.
Source: How To Give Effective Feedback to Your Students
Learning intentions/ goals/targets
Includes specific success criteria
Moves from where students are
In relation to some expected standard
In relation to prior performance
In relation to success or failure on a specific part of the task
Enhanced challenges
More self-regulation over the learning process
Different strategies and processes to work on the task
Deeper understanding
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