I was able to note crucial details about the victim's injuries and the likely attack method. I also processed the information from suspects and witnesses to understand their connections and potential motives. My thorough notes and evaluation of each person helped me rule out people and narrow down the suspect pool. This led me to the correct conclusion that John Dory was the killer.
I was not as proud of the work on this assignment I rushed, and I believed I could have done better. For next time, I want to make my introduction and ending even better so they grab the reader more and tie everything together. Even though I explained the facts, I could try to talk more about how this kind of crime affects people or how it changed police work.