1Marlow continuously comments on the pre-historic nature of Africa. His idea of the antediluvian nature of Africa is supported time and time again by descriptions that indicate the antiquated nature. 2For example, “when the big trees were kings” (Conrad 105). 3By indicating that we have a butcher and a policeman around the corner it shows that today we live a more civilized lifestyle than those in the time before, and Conrad also notes that we have clean, starched clothing, and commerce. 4Instead of killing our own meat we go to a butcher. 5He calls the city in Europe he embarks from the “city of the dead” and a “whited sepulcher,” referring to the New Testament, which is an allusion to the hypocrisy of Europe. 6Also, his tone in talking to his aunt, and in talking when he first arrives about “these high and just proceedings” (82), all delineate that he finds in “civilization” not much worth being deferential toward, although he freely returns to it as the savior from the savagery that he finds in pre-historic Africa. 7In the Christ imagery to describe the death of the helmsman, and in the lack of restraint which leads Kurtz to become like a pagan god, there is an obvious depiction of the ironic irrelevance of religion.
In the above paragraph, the author has tried too hard to achieve a “lofty” or “scholarly” tone. As a result, the paragraph is awkward and unclear.
As an exercise, consider how you might revise the paragraph.