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Handwritten Draft and Initial Feedback
Handwritten Draft and Initial Feedback
The prompt of this essay was In the first draft of my essay, I explained three ways in which Arthur Miller's portrayal of Tituba in the play, The Crucible was inaccurate. The three reasons that I used to support my claim were that Miller changed Tituba's name in the play, he lied about Tituba making Abigail and Betty drink chicken blood, and in "A Note on Historical Accuracy" Miller said himself that he dramatized the play.
Typed and Revised
Typed and Revised
In my revised version of this essay I made some minimal revisions and one major revision. The one major revision I made was adding an implication of detail. My implication further explained how Miller inaccurately portrayed Tituba in the play versus what is historically accurate.
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