Elements
How do the elements of poetry and the elements of our lives connect?
Visual Arts/ Creative Writing
Key Ideas and Details RL.1.1. Ask and answer questions about key details in a text.
Craft and Structure RL.1.4. Identify words and phrases in stories or poems that suggest feelings or appeal to the senses.
Range of Reading and Level of Text Complexity RL.1.10. With prompting and support, read prose and poetry of appropriate complexity for grade 1.
Anchor Standard 1: Generate and Conceptualize artistic ideas and work.
Anchor Standard 5: Develop and refine artistic techniques and work for presentation.
Students were tasked with writing poems on the various elements of life, including the foods we l/eat, the seasons we enjoy, the fears we have that make us 'us', and our hopes and dreams. We wanted to investigate, along with the students, how the elements of poetry, commonly called the poetic devices, can align with our elements. The concept is broad, but we were able to narrow it down with a focused selection and study of poems, read-alouds, interactive video, real-world experiences, and with the creation of clay figurines to cement the overall concept in a tactile way for each student. In the primary grades, students are just beginning to learn about poetry and its elements/devices, and we both thought that a way to introduce poetry in a fun and engaging way would be to approach the topic as such.
Initially, we hoped to design a Poet's Theater out of this project, but it became more of a Readers' Theater/Writing experience. One reason for this was that the students generated quite a bit of poetry, and lessons were peppered with various poetry books and video poetry performances. The first graders were also working on writing and revision, so poems were not just a 'one and done' version. Still, the students worked with teachers and the CAPE TA to revise their poems and place them in a self-made/self-bound book, from which they read for the final showing/presentation of their work to a broader audience/ social engagement. I would not say that because the more formalized Poet's Theater did not materialize as a performance was a case of an aspect of the project 'not working', but rather the project allowed for changes along the way, altering the program's showing portion. It should be noted that the final showcase was 'performative' in nature, with students reading their poems and showing their figurines to the other 1st / 2nd grade classes, and even included a Q and A where students could ask/ answer questions of their creative peers.
The students surprised me with their work on the written word. In first grade, spelling is still experimental, and I learned, as a TA, how to encourage and not overcorrect this aspect. Olga wanted to make sure it wasn't too 'inventive' while at the same time cementing some basic grammar lessons into the creative writing process. I learned by watching Olga teach. She is PRO and makes teaching 1st grade look easy. Where I might have backed away, and given in to a student's want, she pushed them toward academic/productive struggle, and to not give up, etc.
In hindsight, I think I would have had the students produce a bit less writing and worked around movement and sound in poetry, for example, but Olga was an expert in folding in enough academic learning with the art portion that I might now better understand the capabilities of a first grader. She pushed me to 'not underestimate them.' Perseverance, I believe, is what she was teaching, which is valuable in life, academics, and in the Arts.
Assessment was ongoing and cumulative. Students were assessed on their completion of projects, understanding of poetic terms and directions, and the group discussions that followed poetry read aloud.
As stated above, this was my first in-class program with a first-grade classroom during school hours. I really learned by observing Olga, her style, and how she taught the children. I could model some of her teaching methodology, while still wearing my teaching artist hat, as the 'fun' guest in the classroom. I was able to support her goals for the day while still keeping our overall Inquiry Question and Big Idea front of mind. Because the students were so young, one of my main goals for this project was to ensure they had a positive experience with poetry. Some students had prior knowledge, but the proof of the pudding is in the eating, and it was wonderful to see them apply that knowledge in various ways, by sharing their writing, putting the pencil to paper, getting involved in classroom activities, etc.
Students watch a video lesson geared toward young learners, from Chicago Poetry Center (free to educators) called QUEEN Z'S POETIC ADVENTURES in this PBS-style learning series.
Students wrote a repetitive poem about their favorite food. Then, they crafted their favorite food out of clay and prepared a label for it.
Salmon, Yum!
Above: Students engage in Basquiat-style crown-making after reading Maya Angelou's book of poems, illustrated with his paintings, LIFE DOESN'T FRIGHTEN ME AT ALL. Students explore the 'element' of their fears while hearing this book read aloud to them in person and via video.
Above: Students cut wearable crowns and decorate them in the style of Basquiat to wear in school, based on our reading of the poetry picture book!
Student molded a crown inspired by the poem Life Doesn't Frighten Me at All.
Life Doesn't Frighten Me at All
by Maya Angelou
Shadows on the wall
Noises down the hall
Life doesn't frighten me at all
Bad dogs barking loud
Big ghosts in a cloud
Life doesn't frighten me at all
Mean old Mother Goose
Lions on the loose
They don't frighten me at all
Dragons breathing flame
On my counterpane
That doesn't frighten me at all.
I go boo
Make them shoo
I make fun
Way they run
I won't cry
So they fly
I just smile
They go wild
Life doesn't frighten me at all.
Tough guys fight
All alone at night
Life doesn't frighten me at all.
Panthers in the park
Strangers in the dark
No, they don't frighten me at all.
That new classroom where
Boys all pull my hair
(Kissy little girls
With their hair in curls)
They don't frighten me at all.
Don't show me frogs and snakes
And listen for my scream,
If I'm afraid at all
It's only in my dreams.
I've got a magic charm
That I keep up my sleeve
I can walk the ocean floor
And never have to breathe.
Life doesn't frighten me at all
Not at all
Not at all.
Life doesn't frighten me at all.
Above: Students were engaged in curiosity and inquiry from the beginning of the project. Here is a group think tank list that started us off, and to the right is a sample worksheet used to discuss the elements of poetry and the elements that make us unique.
I Am a Big Sis!
"Poetry has never been the language of barriers, it's always been the language of bridges."
-Amanda Gorman, Poet.