For this assignment I had to write a personal narrative about an event in my life . I gave a good description on the actions that lead up to the event. There are a lot of things I would like to change, I feel like I could have mentioned more events that occurred which would fill in some empty spots that were left without context. I would also have liked to add more dialogues and characters to give the personal narrative more life and personality to it because it lacks the perspective of other people that this event affected. In conclusion, I should have given more life and dialogue to the narrative.
In this assignment I had to write an ACES paragraph on an experiment conducted by Stanford. I wrote key points and pulled out references from the experiment to show my thoughts very well. I do think I could have added more information to the paragraph. I could have pulled out more points from the excerpt about the experiment and explained more about how it could have affected the participants after the experiment, even in the long run. In conclusion, I think more detail, depth and facts could have strengthened my ACES paragraph.