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Now that you have completed your story outline, your job is to find a classmate that you can share your outline with and have them provide you some feedback on your initial plan. The idea is simply to have a second set of eyes that might consider things that you didn't when you were putting your plan together.
Now that you have completed your story outline, your job is to find a classmate that you can share your outline with and have them provide you some feedback on your initial plan. The idea is simply to have a second set of eyes that might consider things that you didn't when you were putting your plan together.
These are just ideas if you aren't sure how to help your classmates. Remember that you are welcome to provide any feedback that you think would be helpful. It could even be as simple as two stars and a wish!
Peer Feedback
Peer Feedback
Ideas for things you could include when providing feedback to a classmate are:
Compliments:
Something I noticed that you are good at is...
I really like the way you...
I really enjoyed that part when...
Questions:
I'm wondering why you...?
What do you think you did well...?
What do you think you need to work on?
Suggestions:
Maybe adding...would help...
Instead of... what about...
Maybe next time you could...
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