April 4th  

Middle School

000_MS Agenda 01182024.docx

Agenda

Pre-Work

For your pre-work, please complete the following:

the_cask_of_amontillado.pdf

"The Cask of Amontillado"

During our meeting we will be learning a process for studying student writing and planning follow-up instruction based on what we notice about students' work. The student writing for our work comes from the 7th grade Amplify unit D, Poetry and Poe. In order to study the students' writing, we need to first engage with the text. Please read Poe's "The Cask of Amontillado." Once you've read the text, please respond to the following:

In "The Cask of Amontillado," Poe tells the story of Montresor and his desire for revenge. Please compose two quick writes in response to the following:

Please have your quick write somewhere you can access it during our meeting. You'll be sharing your response with a partner.

the_tell-tale_heart_0.pdf

"The Tell-Tale Heart"

Please read or skim "The Tell-Tale Heart." We won't be working directly with the text, but it will give context to the sample student response that we will work with. 

Student Work Samples

We will be working with the below student samples during our session. If possible, please print out each sample prior to our meeting. It will simplify the process of studying the students' writing.

Sample A.docx

Sample A

Sample B.docx

Sample B

Sample C.docx

Sample C

Sample D.docx

Sample D

Sample E.docx

Sample E

Sample F.docx

Sample F

Materials for Our Work Together in Session from 6:00 to 8:00

Sample Essay

Please work with your partner to review the above sample and note the following: 

Give it a go: Revision

Working with your partner, please work with either the second or third paragraph in the sample response.  Your job is to do two things:

Additional Resources

Conversation frames

These frames have been adapted from They say, I say: The moves that matter in academic writing by Gerald Graff, Cathy Birkenstein, & Russel Durst


Sentence Frames for Conversation.docx
Sentence Frames for Introducing and Explaining Quotations.docx

Introducing and explaining frames

These frames have been adapted from They say, I say: The moves that matter in academic writing by Gerald Graff, Cathy Birkenstein, & Russel Durst

SSW_MS 04042024.docx

Studying Student Work

Google Slides

Please add your breakout room work to a slide. Please make sure to add your names to the notes section of the slide.


Bridge to Practice

Our final NSI meeting will be used to reflect on this year’s instruction, including students’ experiences. The purpose of this bridge to practice is for you to deepen your understanding of the experiences that students are having in their ELAR classroom. You'll use this

information in our May meeting to inform some of your reflection. To be successful with this bridge to practice, please do the following:

Please use the Empathy Interview protocol linked below to interview 1 or 2 students. Please take notes on the conversations that you have. Here are a few tips for collecting your interviews:

Please let us know if you have any questions.

Sara, Glenn, & Tony


07b_HTH_Empathy Interviews_ELAR experiences Student.docx

Empathy Interview Protocol