I heard a whisper behind me but when I turned around, nobody was there.
The old photograph moved every time I looked away.
At the bottom of the school field, I discovered a locked door hidden beneath the grass.
My phone buzzed with a message that said: “Do not open the front door.”
Create your own intriguing story starter.
A clear story with an interesting problem, challenge or adventure
Characters that feel real through their actions, thoughts and feelings
Descriptive and detailed language that helps the reader imagine what is happening
Example:
The icy wind howled through the dark forest as Maia clutched the glowing map tightly in her trembling hands. Leaves crackled beneath her boots while shadows danced between the trees.
Capital letters and full stops used correctly
Speech marks used for dialogue
Commas, question marks and exclamation marks used correctly
Common words spelled correctly and tricky words attempted carefully
Example:
"Wait for me!" shouted Aria.
“Are you sure this is the right way?” asked Sam nervously.
A strong beginning that hooks the reader
Events organised in a clear order
Clear paragraphs for different parts of the story
A satisfying ending that solves the problem or finishes the adventure
Example:
Beginning: Introduce the setting and characters
Middle: The problem or adventure happens
Ending: The character solves the problem or learns something important
Complete sentences that make sense
Different sentence lengths to make writing interesting
Joining ideas smoothly using words like because, while, after and suddenly
Example:
Hemi sprinted down the hill. His heart pounded wildly because the enormous dog was chasing him. Suddenly, he tripped over a tree root and crashed into the muddy grass.
Interesting verbs instead of simple words like went or said
Similes, metaphors or onomatopoeia to make writing exciting
Words that help create mood and emotion
Example:
The thunder BOOMED across the sky like a giant drum. Tama crept silently through the hallway, his stomach twisting like a knot.
WALT (Learning Intention): We are learning to write a creative paragraph as if we are a WW1 soldier landing at ANZAC Cove.
I can write in first person (I, we, my)
I can include real facts about the ANZAC landing
I can describe what I can see, hear and feel
I can use interesting vocabulary to make my writing clear and detailed
The landing happened on 25 April 1915
Soldiers were from New Zealand and Australia (ANZACs)
They landed at ANZAC Cove in Gallipoli, Turkey
They arrived in small boats early in the morning (before sunrise)
The landing was confusing and dangerous
Soldiers faced steep cliffs and hills
There was gunfire from the enemy (Ottoman soldiers)
Many soldiers felt scared but also brave
Setting words
beach
cliffs
dark
dawn
waves
Action words
landing
rowing
climbing
running
firing
Feeling words
scared
nervous
brave
worried
determined
Sound words
gunfire
explosions
shouting
splashing
Write non-fiction paragraphs that include a topic sentence, supporting detail sentences, and a concluding sentence
Purpose: To inform our readers
We are learning to write a non-fiction paragraph that has a clear topic sentence, supporting details and a concluding sentence.
I can start with a topic sentence that tells the main idea
I can add supporting detail sentences that give facts or information
I can finish with a concluding sentence that wraps up my ideas
I can stay on one topic throughout my paragraph
Topic sentence:
Fantails are small birds with special features that make them easy to recognise.
Explain sentences:
They have a small head and a short beak.
Their most noticeable feature is their wide, fanned tail.
Fantails come in two different colours.
Example sentence:
For example, the pied fantail has grey, brown, black and white feathers, while the black fantail is mostly black.
Concluding sentence:
These features help people easily identify fantails in New Zealand.
Topic sentence:
Fantails have clever ways of finding and catching their food.
Explain sentences:
They eat insects like flies, moths and spiders.
They use different methods to catch their food.
These methods help them catch lots of insects quickly.
Example sentence:
For example, fantails use “hawking” by flying out to catch insects, and “flushing” by disturbing insects from plants.
Concluding sentence:
These hunting methods help fantails survive and find enough food to eat.
Purpose: To inform our readers
We are learning to write a non-fiction paragraph that has a clear topic sentence, supporting details and a concluding sentence.
I can start with a topic sentence that tells the main idea
I can add supporting detail sentences that give facts or information
I can finish with a concluding sentence that wraps up my ideas
I can stay on one topic throughout my paragraph
Purpose: To inform our readers
We are learning to write a non-fiction paragraph that has a clear topic sentence, supporting details and a concluding sentence.
I can start with a topic sentence that tells the main idea
I can add supporting detail sentences that give facts or information
I can finish with a concluding sentence that wraps up my ideas
I can stay on one topic throughout my paragraph
Purpose: To inform our readers
WALT:
We are learning to write about ourselves using clear ideas so others can understand who we are.
I can share ideas about myself using full sentences
I can give more than one detail about my ideas
I can organise my ideas so they make sense
I can write for someone else to read and understand
I am…
I feel happy when…
I am really good at…
Something special about me is…
I am proud of…
I am learning to…
My family is from…
In my family we like to…
A tradition in my family is…
Someone important to me is…
My family teaches me to…
My culture is important to me because…
In my culture we celebrate…
Something unique about my culture is…
I speak…
A food I enjoy from my culture is…
When I grow up I want to…
I hope to…
I want to get better at…
A goal I have is…
In the future I would like to…
I care about…
I show respect by…
I am a good friend because…
I help others by…
Something that matters to me is…
I enjoy…
My favourite thing to do is…
I am interested in…
I feel proud when I…
I am good at…
Write narratives that, include an orientation, paragraphs describing a sequence of events that build tension, and a resolution that brings the story to a close.
WALT: We are learning to write the start of a story by introducing the characters, describing the setting and explaining what is happening first.
Success Criteria
I can describe where the story is set
I can introduce who is in the story
I can explain what is happening at the beginning
I can use describing words to create a clear picture
Where is this place?
What can we see, hear or feel?
Examples:
dark forest
quiet and creepy
cold air
tall trees
Who is in the story?
Why are they there?
Examples:
Aroha and her cousin
A group of friends
A boy exploring alone
What are they doing?
How are they feeling?
Examples:
arriving at the cabin
feeling nervous
hearing strange sounds
We are learning to:
Start with an orientation
Introduce the characters (who is in the story)
Describe the setting (where the story happens)
Tell the reader what is happening at the start
Write paragraphs that show the sequence of events
Tell what happens first, next, then and late
Put the events in the correct order
Build tension in the story
Show a problem or something going wrong
Make the problem get bigger or more exciting
Show how the character feels and reacts
Finish with a resolution
Explain how the problem is solved
Show what happens at the end
Help the story feel finished for the reader
Paragraph 1 – Orientation
At the end of a dingy, dilapidated hall that looked almost forgotten, there stood a creaky wooden door. Dust covered the walls and the floorboards groaned with every step. But behind that old door was something unbelievable. When it opened, a bright and colourful laboratory appeared, glowing with bubbling bottles and swirling vapour. I was only a student in this secret academy, learning from the legendary alchemists who worked there. Some people thought what we did was magic, but really we were just slightly crazed scientists trying to uncover the world’s secrets.
Paragraph 2 – Events Begin
One evening our teacher, the most legendary alchemist of them all, invited us to watch a new discovery. “Tonight,” he said, “we will combine these liquids to create a powerful elixir.” He slowly poured a glowing green liquid into a flask filled with bright blue crystals. The strange concoction began to bubble and hiss. Purple vapour rose into the air and the room shimmered as if something magical was about to happen.
Paragraph 3 – The Problem Builds
Suddenly the bubbling grew louder. The flask shook and the colours inside began to transform into fiery orange. “That wasn’t meant to happen,” the alchemist muttered. A sudden burst of smoke shot into the air and the mixture started to glow brighter and brighter. The laboratory rattled as if an explosion might happen at any moment. My heart raced as we searched the shelves for the antidote that could stop the unstable potion.
My hands trembled as I grabbed bottle after bottle, trying to read the tiny labels through the thick smoke. I felt a knot of fear twist in my stomach as the glowing flask shook even harder. I wanted to run, but I forced myself to stay and help. If we didn’t find the antidote soon, the whole laboratory could explode.
Alchemist – A person who studies magic-like science and tries to change things, like turning metal into gold.
Enchant – To use magic to make something special or magical.
Legendary – Very famous and often part of old stories or legends.
Concoction – A mixture made by combining different ingredients together.
Discovery – Finding something new or learning something that was not known before.
Vapour – A gas that comes from a liquid, like steam from hot water.
Combine – To mix or join things together.
Antidote – Something that can stop a poison or make someone better.
Transform – To change something into something different.
Sudden – Happening very quickly without warning.
Crazed – Acting wild or out of control.
Elixir – A special drink or potion that is believed to heal or give power.
Explosion – A loud burst when something blows up quickly.
Laboratory – A place where scientists do experiments.
Liquid – A substance that flows and can be poured, like water or milk.
Navigate – To find your way or guide something from one place to another.
Turbulent – Very rough or wild, especially about air or water moving a lot.
Ocean – A very large body of salt water that covers much of Earth.
Barrage – A lot of things happening or coming at once, like many questions or attacks.
Storm – Bad weather with strong wind, rain, thunder, or lightning.
Captain – The person in charge of a ship or boat.
Impassable – A place that cannot be travelled through because it is blocked or too dangerous.
Unforeseen – Something that was not expected or planned for.
Devastate – To cause a lot of damage or destruction.
Imminent – About to happen very soon.
Voyage – A long journey, usually by sea or ship.
Debris – Broken pieces left after something has been damaged or destroyed.
Menacing – Looking or feeling dangerous, like something bad might happen.
Warning – A message that tells people danger may be coming.
Location – The place where something is.
Recognise and use prefixes to help understand and spell new words.
✅ SC1: I can identify common prefixes and explain what they mean.
✅ SC2: I can use prefixes to help me spell new words.
✅ SC3: I can check and correct my spelling using word knowledge dictionaries or digital tools.
WALT (We Are Learning To):
Recognise and use spelling patterns to spell words with the long /ā/ sound made by ‘eigh’ correctly.
Success Criteria:
✅ SC1: I can identify words that use the ‘eigh’ spelling pattern for the long /ā/ sound.
✅ SC2: I can use what I know about this spelling pattern to spell new words with the same sound.
✅ SC3: I can check and correct my spelling using word knowledge, dictionaries, or digital tools.
WALT (We Are Learning To): Recognise and use spelling patterns to spell words with the /or/ sound correctly.
Success Criteria:
SC1: I can identify words that use the ‘au’ and ‘aw’ spelling patterns for the /or/ sound.
SC2: I can use what I know about spelling patterns to spell new words with the same sound.
SC3: I can check and correct my spelling using word knowledge, dictionaries, or digital tools.
WALT (We Are Learning To):
We are learning to identify the key features of a recount and use a marking rubric to give and receive helpful feedback.
Success Criteria:
I can describe what a recount needs (orientation, events in order, and a conclusion).
I can use the marking rubric to check if these parts are included in a recount.
I can give clear peer feedback that says what worked well and what could be improved.
I can use the feedback I receive to decide on my next steps in writing.
Further Follow-up Task
Gramma & Puncuation
Class Writing
WALT:
We are learning to write a personal comment for our school report that shares what we enjoy and what we are working on.
Success Criteria:
✅ I can write what I like about school
✅ I can share one learning goal I am working on
✅ I can write about my favourite subject and why I like it
✅ I can write in full sentences that sound like me
Parts of Speech Quest
Parts of Speech Quest
Part two
Parts of Speech Quest
Part three
Parts of Speech Quest
Part four
Parts of Speech Quest
Part five
Parts of Speech Quest
Part seven
Parts of Speech Quest
Part eight
Handwriting
Thank you for giving your time and energy to help make our surf trip such a success.
We really appreciate the support you gave during our beach games.
Thank you for helping keep our students safe and encouraged while they were learning to surf.
Your help at lunchtime made the day run smoothly and stress free.
Thank you for supporting our students in the playground and helping them make positive choices.
We are grateful for the care and supervision you provided throughout the day.
Thank you for stepping in wherever you were needed and showing such flexibility.
The students benefited so much from your guidance and encouragement.
We appreciate the time you took out of your day to be part of our trip.
Thank you for helping create a fun, safe and memorable experience for everyone involved.