ELO Writing Competition - 2nd Place

Ireland as the Destination of English Study Tour

By Iqbal Tania (3B)

Dear Principal Tam,

I’m writing to you to recommend the English country which I think is the best place to visit and study in for our schools English Study Tour next summer holiday.

I think Ireland is the best place to visit and study in because English is the official language there. And by communicating with the people there, we can improve our English. Ireland is less crowded compared to other English speaking countries like Australia and England. They are more popular destinations than Ireland and more people pay a visit there during summer. However, fewer people visit Ireland which means it will be less crowded and safer for us.

Ireland is also known as one of the most beautiful countries in the world. Ireland is a place with a lot of greenery and breathtaking views which is attractive for us. The gorgeous landscapes, the greenery, the mountains, the fields, the countryside provides a peaceful environment for study as the countryside is quieter than cities. It provides a unique and different experience for our students.

As its the education system is similar to that in England, we won’t miss out on the benefits of a good education system. With many people attracted to the major cities in England, Ireland is a better option as we can enjoy not only the benefits of UK’s education system but also the security and peace of less crowded cities. Also, we will be able to get to know the culture and tradition of Ireland because less tourists go there. This means that there will be more Irish people for us to communicate with.

To sum up, I really believe that Ireland is the best place to undertake a summer study tour.

Yours sincerely,

Tania Iqbal