Introduction: Learning to manage money is important in our life. Learning to manage money is something that everyone must to do because balance between income and expenses is essential for life. In my opinion, there are a lot of ways people can learn to manage their money
Body paragraph 1: A key idea in managing money is make sure that you earn more money than you spend.
-This needs some basic education and previous knowledge. For example, parents give the children money so they can buy snacks or things they wants, when they want buy something that expensive, they will have to learn to save money by themselves
Body paragraph 2: you need to understand what is necessary to spend and what is not necessary. For example, many young people following their favorite celebrities or last trends, like advertising about new smartphone and features on phone, even when their current phones are still new and working well. This is the reason young people spending money in ways that always make sense. They should change their spending habits
Conclusion: In brief, the best way to manage money is understand how to spend and save money, buy what is necessary and important
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Res: B,C,E,I,J
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Introduction: At the age of 16, many young people are legally responsible for themselves. This also is a transisional age into adulthood. The question is: should parents intervene in the lives of their 15-year-old children? I suspect that parents should be a guides for their children's well-being future while ensuring chidren's independent.
Body paragraph 1: parents is a guides for their children
In adolescence, this is a age of developing and easy to make mistake
Parental guidance helps children stay on track and develop properly.
Body paragraph 2: children independence
Over controlling will lead to many problem.
Parents should also allow some independence to help teenagers develop responsibility.