WALT understand how to write a narrative.
WALT understand how to write a narrative.
Narratives are just a fancy way of saying stories!
There are so many stories! Stories can be in books or on shows!
Here are some awesome story examples:
Finding Nemo
Captain Underpants
13 Story Treehouse
Green Eggs and Ham
Teen Titans
even the game Fortnite has a story!
etc
Awesome authors/ writers take a long time planning and brainstorming their ideas. They come up with many ideas, and then choose just their best ideas.
A great way to come up with lots of ideas is to brainstorm all of your ideas for characters, setting, problems and the ending on a brainstorming sheet. Set a timer (5 minutes should be plenty of time).
Then braindump all of your ideas onto the paper!
Once you have all of your awesome ideas written down, you can now circle all of the best ideas for your story!
In our writing time at SMC, we try to remember that Narratives have the following:
Introduction:
Sizzling Start
Backfill
Middle/ Problems/ Complications:
Little Pebble
Rock
Boulder
Conclusion
Resolution/ Fixing the problems
Character wrap up/ talk about how the characters feel
Here is the template that we fill in with our chosen ideas from the brainstorming activity:
A good writer uses different techniques to make their story more exciting!
The first thing is they plan, plan, plan!!!!
Then authors use techniques and strategies like...
Sizzling Starts
Tightening Tension moments in their problems
Dynamic Dialogue (speech)
Show, Don't Tell
Ban The Boring
Exciting Endings
WALT understand sizzling starts.
Sizzling starts are exciting!!!
Narrative sizzling starts
•Start at a moment of change
(when did something odd/ funny/ bad/ exciting happen).
•Backfill as the action unfolds
(the w’s – who, what, when, where, why)
•Go back to the live action – quickly
Backfill can also be in separate scenes later.
Sizzling Start ideas:
Use onomatopoeia ( Boom! Smash! Brrrrrr!)
Use dialogue or speech ("Seriously, stop being annoying!")
Start in the middle of something going wrong, or something exciting (Looking all around me, all I could see was flying monkeys! What on earth was going on!)
Use humour (Knock Knock. Who's there? Tank. Tank who? You're welcome).
You can find great examples of sizzling starts in these books:
The Cabbage Patch Fib by Paul Jennings
Charlotte's Web by E.B. White
The Very Hungry Caterpillar by Eric Carle
Dairy of a Wimpy Kid by Jeff Kinney
A Series of Unfortunate Events by Lemony Snicket
Voyage of the Dawn Treader by C.S. Lewis
Captain Underpants by Dav Pilkey
Here are some video examples of sizzling starts:
As you are watching these, remember that these were written as stories before they were turned into movies.
How would you write these stories down to create a picture in your audience's imagination?
Sizzling Start Activity
Think about how you feel about this starting sentence:
Moment of change - Welcome to the crazy ‘jungle’ challenge. You could win $1 000 000. I can do it.
Close your eyes, and for 1 minute, imagine this situation using all of your senses.
What can you see?
What can you hear?
What do you feel?
What can you taste?
What can you smell?
Now try writing a paragraph as a sizzling start. Include all of your senses that you just imagined.
Start your timer: You have 1 minute and 40 seconds.
WALT understand Tightening Tension.