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Person one -
The criticism of nothing being on the home page is a very fair one, I was just wanting to make sure I had the story and project details worked out before I put a paragraph there to explain what I am making. Since I have these details sorted, I can definitely fix this problem and write that paragraph, maybe with a picture of myself and a short description of who I am and what I want in the future, this could add a personal aspect to the site.
What will I change
Add a project description to the home page
Make the Trello colour coding more often
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Person two -
This person said that I haven't researched similar games despite my research into similar games being easily found on the Planning Work page as a button as well as found just by hovering over planning work and clicking the very obviously named "similar games" tab. Aside from this, they also say that it isn't clear what game I picked. This doesn't really make sense as my GDD has the story fully visible and how it would work. I can still kind of agree though as I haven't explained what the game is on its own page or on the main home page.
What will I change
Add a project description (aims and such) to the home page
Somehow make the similar games tab more find-able (???)
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Person Three -
The third person mentions how they like how well organised the project is, alongside how much research I have managed to do. These are things I should continue doing in the future as my peers seem to think of it in a good light. They do think that I can improve the site by putting buttons on the reference list which links to the place the linked site is used though.
What will I change
Add buttons linking to where references are used
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Person Four -
The fourth person just mentioned how more imagery could be used but the site is overall nice. The extra imagery was avoided to not have to link to every source of every image, though I could probably improve on this since it takes so little time to log a reference.
What will I change
Add more images so that the website doesn't just feel like blocks of text
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Conclusion
Despite needing a few smaller improvements, the site is overall looking like a huge success. My peers have no major issues with it all and can only suggest things that other people might see as picky or just a little too far flung, but I see the feedback as something I can genuinely use to make the best site possible. By following the feedback of peers I will be able to come out the other end of this project with the best work possible done, this can only be achieved by following the advice of my peers and by making the changes I listed above.
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