SMILE OF THE RICE GODDESS
By Chiranan Pitpreecha
Tightening her calf muscles,
She steps on the pestle ...
Tup ... Tup
Lifting and releasing, repeatedly
The husk is pounded,
By firm legs that move
To the rhythm of the pestle,
TukTak Tup ...
TukTakTup ...
Her skillful legs,
Neither white or tender
Tip up the edge of her lower garment,
Her movement is strong and skillful.
She lifts her foot to press down the pole,
Press and release,
Press and release,
The sound of pole striking the husk...
Tuk Tuk Tup! Tuk Tuk Tup!
Faster and faster she pounds
Again and again she wipes away the
glittering sweat,
But her smile remains
The smile that chokes my heart
Many young women stand shoulder to
shoulder
Stepping and releasing again and again
The sound of the pestle mixed with laughter
And teasing.
When the husk is cracked
Two small hands scoop
The shining white rice from the mortar
Carefully pour it into the winnowing tray
Taralaek! Taralaek!
The grain spins and bounces
To and fro
Nearly missing the tray.
Left and right it sways,
With a rice-dance, hypnotic motion.
Beauty and strength mingle
In the winnowing tray
With sweat that pours freely.
When no oneforces.it
It pours energy
That spreads a stream of the spirit
Of selflessness.
There are no traces of tears in the sweat
With this rice ... the people repay their
warriors
The goddess of rice, carrying her baskets,
approaches
With the hint of a smile
Wipes the sweat from her brow.
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SMILE OF THE RICE GODDESS by Chiranan Pitpreecha
Story Analysis by Shaira Mae S. Umayam
REFLECTION
The poem contains the significant relationship of its tradition pertaining to its country. Chiranan Pitpreecha's exquisite poem "Smile of the Rice Goddess" honors Thailand's long-standing farming culture. It describes cooperative groups of farmers, particularly women, pounding rice with pestles using vivid language. Unity and kindness, which are essential to the community and reflect the entire country, are shown through collaboration.You can almost hear the repetitive beating of the pestles and their impact in the poem because of the imaginative preference of words which sound like the events they portray. The poem also emphasizes the vital role played by women farmers, who often don't receive enough recognition for their contributions to the agricultural field, which is essential to Thailand. These women are a symbol of toughness, resilience, and unity which has enabled Thailand to prosper for many years. In conclusion, "Smile of the Rice Goddess" is a powerful tribute to the farmers in the fields, the enduring farming traditions, and the entire country of Thailand. It serves as a reminder of the significance of keeping up with these traditions.
THEMES
According to the poem of the “Smile of the Rice Goddess” by Chiranan Pitpreecha, the harmony is reflected in the rhythmic sound of the pestles and the synchronized movements of the farmers while the female farmers are working together to crush the rice. It also emphasizes the teamwork of each worker, especially women empowerment and highlights how they should communicate to each other with kindness and support. In terms of agricultural tradition it showcases the thailand tradition that is focused on its countries cultivation, in which pestle crushing is one of their traditional methods in rice milling and the significance of it to its country. It can be shown here the selflessness and dedication of the hard work of women.
CULTURE CONTEXT
The cultural context of the poem is all about Thailand and how essential rice cultivation is there. Many Thai women dedicate a lot of effort in growing rice, which makes them the farmers and super heroes of the nation. This poem is enormous for these amazing, hard-working women. Additionally, it discusses how pleasant and tranquil Thai society is.In Thailand, agriculture thrives, and rice is the main crop. Rice is an integral part of the locals who cherish it.
SYMBOLISM
The poem "SMILE OF THE RICE GODDESS" contains deep symbolism that explores Thai society and culture. A significant symbol of the essential significance of rice in the lives of the Thai people is the adored figure of the rice goddess. The very name, "SMILE OF THE RICE GODDESS," indicates that the goddess herself is gracing the farmers' labor, and their camaraderie and mutual kindness reflect the god's helpful smile. The pestles and mortars serve meaningful functions in the poem, representing the farmers' persistent commitment and endless efforts in their difficult jobs.
LITERARY TECHNIQUE
Imagey: The poem shows vivid imagery describing women pounding rice and the activities in the poem. The reader can visualize the place or how the events are happening in the poem.
Repetition: “Tuk Tuk Tup” and “Taralaek” adds a rhythmic in the poem, that describes the repetitive movement of the character in the poem.
Metaphor: The poem uses metaphor to compare the woman’s strength to her “skillful legs” and her actions to a “rice- dance”. This is considered a metaphor because this does not use”like” to compare the two objects.
Personification: The “goddess of rice”, which pertains to the women in the rice field.