If you choose to revise your assignment, please submit the revised document to turnitin.com under the appropriate assignment. Attach a cover memo to your revision that addresses the following:
What do you want your reader to take away from reading your document? What are you trying to achieve? What should it communicate essentially?
What are the most important improvements your instructor recommended?
What have you learned about writing from your peers' reviews and my review of your work?
How does your revision address these reviews and recommendations?
*For the project proposal memo, simply address these questions (i.e., how you revised your memo based on the feedback you received) in the memo itself. You need not attach another memo to your memo.
Sample revision: Rayna Willenbrink's HIE revision
Revisions must be submitted by the deadlines designated in Canvas.