This week we have our school FiaFia night on Wednesday 5th April. We will be having lots of practices this week during the day. For our learning this week we will be looking at our previous Fiafia performances in preparation.
WALT: add interesting detail to our writing to support our ideas.
WALT: edit our writing, ensuring we use punctuation and have a range of sentence types
In Week 5, we had a fantastic camp! Were you tired after camp?! We were busy and had lots of fun doing many different activities.
Your task:
Write a reflection/ recount about your experiences at the Year 5 and 6 camp this year. You may present this however you would like:
Writing (with photos or drawings)
Presentation/ Slides
Movie (with voice over)
Just remember, it needs to be on your blog by Thursday! (School Picnic on Friday).
If you were not at camp, you may write a recount about something you did in class last week with Ms Lowans/Home.
Tags: 2023, Writing, Room 9, Camp, Year 5 and 6 camp, Pt England School
WALT: write a formal thankyou letter.
This week we are going to be learning about simple, compound and complex sentences and how to use thee effectively in our writing. You will be writing a number of compound, complex and simple sentences so that you know how to use and identify them in your writing.
Watch the video about simple, compound and complex sentences.
Go through some examples with Mrs Siō.
Make a copy of the writing task for this week.
See your teacher when your group is called upon.
Complete the writing tasks for this week.
Post these on your blog with a task description.
This week, from Wednesday to Friday, we are on Year 5/6 Camp. We are so excited to go as we didn't get to have this camp last year due to Covid19 - the first camp we missed in over 30 years!
WALT: create a piece of narrative writing using descriptive language.
Last week New Zealand was hit by Severe Tropical Cyclone Gabrielle. We think of everyone who was impacted, especially those who have lost loved ones, their properties destroyed and have lost everything, and have no place to live.
Our task is to put ourselves 'in their shoes'. What details would you need to include for our audience to experience it as well.
Watch this video of residents who live in Piha.
Go through the task with Mrs Siō.
See Mrs Siō when your group is called upon.
Complete the writing tasks for this week.
Post this on your Edublog with a description. Include the tags: 2023, writing, room 9, Mrs Sio
WALT: structure a recount using detailed and descriptive language.
Last week on Friday we were lucky enough to have a Duffy assembly. This performance was about Duffy and his trip to space. This week we are going to create a recount about our experience at the Duffy assembly. We want to try and make our recount exciting and interesting to our readers.
Watch the video about how to create a recount.
Go through the task and resources with your teacher.
Complete the recount writing task.
Check out the recount helpful hints to help you when proofreading your work.
Post this on your blog: Tags: 2023, writing, room 9, Mrs Sio, Duffy recount.
WALT: write about ourselves on the internet in a cybersmart way.
Today you are going to write all about yourself. Tell your new teacher everything, that you think they should know.
It is a new year so we need to be updating our 'about me' blurbs on our Edublogs!
Watch this video of PES digital learners
Complete the 'Share or not to share' grid with a buddy of being cybersmart with sharing our information on the internet.
Use the 'helpful hints & brainstorm' templates to generate ideas about what you're going to write.
By using your brainstorm template, begin the task of 'About Me writing'.
If you've finished everything - make a copy of 'start of 2023' slides.
Tags: 2023, writing, room 9, Mrs Sio, All about me