Hola, me llama Kristine. Estoy en el undécimo grado. Me clase hacimos un separamos grupo proyecto en diferente global impactos. Nosotros creíamos tráfico de animales silvestres y ilegal comercio es triste porque gente no debería matar el animales porque ellos queríamos a. Es Importante aprendimos esta porque nosotros podamos informamos otra. Informamos gente podamos ayudamos el situación. Gente necesita aprendan el différence entre quieras y necesitas. Tambien, gente necesita reflejar de sobre su acción.
My class project is about different traffics. The conflict that my group and I chose is about animal trafficking's and illegal trading around the world. We read a article called "Comercio ileagal de vida silvestre" and it was bout the Impact, effects, and what WWF(World Wildlife Fund) do as a solution of animal trafficking's and illegal trading. It is important to know about this because we the people can let awareness to decrease the impact of animals. My group and I believe wildlife trafficking and illegal trade is sad because people should not kill animals because they wanted to. It is important that we learn this because we can inform others. We inform people we can help the situation. People need to learn the difference between wants and needs. Also, people need to reflect on their actions.
My group and I created an infographic that consist of a dramatic image that catches your audiences attention. It as like a flyer or billboard for passerby's who are simply glancing at the material.
How did you feel as you wrote the essay? What grade did you think you would get, and how does that compare to the grade you got? I felt good as I was writing this essay. I think I would get a 5/6 and that was the grade I got.
Type and evaluate your thesis. Did you get the point? Do you think you could have improved your thesis? My Thesis: Miller's claim about why he wrote "The Crucible" , he has good and specific reasons why he wrote it. Using those word choices to show pathos, which showed the tone of argument was thoughtful and explicit. Yes I got the point and I'm sure I can improve on my thesis by using a bigger vocabulary for some words.
What was your score for evidence and commentary? What did you do well? How could you improve? My score for evidence and commentary was 4/4. I did well on stating my evidence to support my argument ad identifying word choice and pathos. I could improve on going more in depth in my commentary.
Did you get the sophistication point? How could you improve? I did not get the sophistication point but I did try but I could improve on being clear about how it relate to today.
Health Art Museum
The health art museum is a virtual museum I created using Artsteps. In the museum it shows what I've learned . Click here to view!