Liberation of the Mind: Writers' First Step
By Woo Jie Rui Ambrose (24S36), Muhammad Danial Tan Tong Sian (24S55), Marti Sai Sriya (24S63) and Chin Zhi Qing (24S64)
By Woo Jie Rui Ambrose (24S36), Muhammad Danial Tan Tong Sian (24S55), Marti Sai Sriya (24S63) and Chin Zhi Qing (24S64)
On the bright and early morning of 14 March, members of Writers’ Circle gathered in school for their annual March camp. The day was destined to be packed full of icebreaker activities, workshops and finally, the main event, a visit to the National Gallery, where the members got to create and strengthen bonds between one another and hone their writing skills. What a wonderful time indeed!
Right before the icebreaker activities, members were split into groups of five or six containing a mix of J1s and J2s – these would be the people they mainly stayed with for the rest of the day. Fortunately, despite the initial awkwardness, everyone seemed to hit it off immediately as laughter and chatter erupted across the room.
Writers presenting their pieces in front of the other members.
Picture taken by VJC Writers’ Circle.
As for the main icebreaker activity, each group was tasked with writing a piece of their choice on the spot based on the unique prompt and genre given. For example, the prompt could be “My homework ate my dog” and the genre could be “Horror”. After some long and spirited discussions, each group read out their poems and prose with gusto to the entire club – with some even acting their story out. Lots of chuckling and giggling ensued.
[Press workshop]
At 11am, all members disseminated into their respective workshops allocated to them. There were two workshops planned: press and creative, for our writers to gain a fresh perspective on writing and practise it through various activities both individually and as a group.
The press workshop was conducted by Singaporean writer and editor Clara Chow. Clara Chow has had close to 20 years of journalism experience writing for The Straits Times, the South China Morning Post and more. She has also published a debut collection of short stories inspired by imaginary buildings, Dream Storeys (Ethos, 2016).
To lighten the mood and spark some excitement, members were tasked with a few writing exercises throughout the workshop to ease into the writing process. The exercises included imagining themselves and their surroundings in the kitchen when they were 3 years old, as well as interviewing their partners on their dream buildings. Though strange at the beginning, students later shared their pieces with Ms Chow and were able to receive helpful feedback.
After warming up, Ms Chow focused on creative nonfiction writing, a style that many were not introduced to before. With a passion for both creative writing and journalism, creative nonfiction serves as a bridge between the two as it encompasses texts about factual events that are not solely for educational purposes, and includes an imaginative spin on the piece. Members read a few excerpts from books as well as articles which consisted of creative non-fiction to familiarise themselves with the concepts. Some included Stories of the Sahara by Sanmao, and The Fourth State of Matter by Jo Anne Beard. These stories adopted a similar notion to journalism with descriptions of the places and people from the author's travels. However, a unique touch was present as the author added an individual point of view, providing their thoughts and feelings whilst presenting the facts. Previous confusion about the idea of creative nonfiction grew into curiosity about the ways this technique was applied, and students started to engage with Ms Chow further.
Ms Chow ended her workshop by encouraging all students to continue writing whenever they can, even if it may only be 10 minutes on the bus ride home from school. “As long as you write, you are a writer”, she remarked.
[Creative Workshop]
For the prose workshop, members were enlightened on literary imagery by Mr Daryl Qilin Yam, a Singaporean writer, editor, arts organiser and co-founder of the literary charity Sing Lit Station. The main focus of the workshop was on the different methods to evoke imagery in poetry, namely, metaphors, similes and symbols, along with the differences between each method. After explanation came application, as members made their own metaphors, similes, and ended up splitting into 2 groups to make their own group poems, starting each line with the phrase “Release everything”. The results were…interesting to say the least. For example:
“Release everything
that you keep within and unleash them as you see fit
Release the flatulence brewing
Release that breath you’ve been holding with every step you took.”
The creative workshop finally ended in high spirits with a Q and A session, mostly about the life of Mr Daryl Yam as a writer in Singapore.
Behind the scenes, the EXCO faced one of their hardest challenges – getting the right people to do the workshop. One of the EXCO, Sreshti Pendyala from class 23S63 explained, “[The writers] had to be available at the right time for us and it had to be based on what we thought was best fit for our writers and what we want them to get out of it. For the press side, a lot of our writers are currently dual wing but they are more inclined towards creative, which is why we got a writer who is a creative non-fiction writer to just give them one, a fresh perspective, and two, ease them into non-fiction writing and journalism in a way that combines both of them (creative and press) to show them that ‘Hey, it’s not two entirely different things, there is a possibility where you can combine these two things.’” In the end, it seemed like their pick of writers was wise and it worked out.
Writers’ Circle arriving at the National Gallery; The National Gallery itself;
The view from the top floor of the gallery (near the bar).
Pictures taken by VJC Writers’ Circle.
At the National Gallery, the club mainly explored the exhibit called “Tropical Stories from Southeast Asia and Latin America”. It was filled to the brim with paintings; the story of oppression, captivity and eventual liberation adorned every wall. Tasked with writing another literary piece of their choice about anything they saw, with the exceptions of “cages”, “birds”, and “ropes”, they set off in search of their inspiration.
The exhibits in the National Gallery, such as “Tropical Stories from Southeast Asia and Latin America”.
Pictures taken by VJC Writers’ Circle.
Through this activity, they exercised their creativity and gained deep insights into the struggles faced by pioneers, the fighting spirit throughout Southeast Asia and Latin America, and the people’s battle for liberation.
Although the visit to the National Gallery was a great success, there was still room for something new. Sreshti added on one thing that could have been done differently, “Finding a different location, not necessarily because I don’t like [the National Gallery], I think it’s great and it has a lot of potential. Currently, the National Gallery is a lot about visuals. It would be interesting to explore a place where you have to engage different senses like touch — through tactile — and scent. So places like Botanical Gardens or Gardens by the Bay.”
Despite that, the experience was still well received by the fresh juniors as quoted by Tan Jing Kee Naomi from 24A14, “It is an interesting way to start writing. It is fun outside school.” It is important that fresh juniors in the future cohorts be able to have an early, fun and educational experience in their CCAs as so much can happen in 2 years, especially coupled with the fact that they need to juggle their responsibilities. As the lives of J1s across the cohort begin to experience the acceleration of their pace in life, it is essential that they are also given meaningful experiences along the way.