Rules for good writing + Notice this when reading:
ACTION Tag (active verb) Vs. REGULAR Tag (said).
Commas or Endmarks go inside QUOTES.
New Speaker, New Line (Same Speaker, Same Line).
Use "said" or "asked" most often; they're invisible.
"Start with a capital letter."
Strongest dialogue? An argument: "Please?" / "Maybe."
Rules for good writing + Notice this when reading:
THREES please the reader's ear, so use them often.
THREE verbs, three adverbs, three phrases, or even actions.
THREE strong sentences that start the same—always a good move.
THREE lines of dialogue.
Anything done in a THREE, please.
THREE, one-word repeats (for a good reason).
Rules for good writing + Notice this when reading:
Explore what something is NOT.
DO NOT TELL, show or visually describe for your reader.
Let your reader puzzle something out. Write around and NOT reveal what you want to reader to know.
Combine a THREE with NOT: He does NOT. He does NOT. And he definitely does NOT—not ever—do something more detailed.
Create mystery: Tell only what someone will NOT do.
Rules for good writing + Notice this when reading:
Use ACTIVE, ACTION verbs as much as possible.
Avoid inactive, to be verbs: is, was, were, been, have, has, had, do, does, did, will, would, shall and should, etc. Circle and eliminate most.
Oust adverbs (—LY, especially). Select that "Just Right" verb.
Add VERB and VISUAL IMAGERY to gamify your writing.
Rules for good writing + Notice this when reading:
Use a COMMA before a FANBOYS when SUBJECT and VERB follows it.
Cast COMMAS around a direct address: A PERSON you are speaking to
Use COMMAS in a SERIES--and don't for get the OXFORD before AND
Place COMMA inside QUOTE MARKS for REG Dialogue Tags
Use a COMMA after INTRODUCTORY WORDS: First,
Cast COMMAS around a dropped in CLAUSE.
Rules for good writing + Notice this when reading:
Complete EXPOSITION: Main Character (MC), Setting, and PROBLEM
RISING ACTION: Three Conflicts or more (Internal AND/OR External)
CONFLICT: The Ah-ha Moment or when things cannot get any worse for your MC
FALLING ACTION:
CONCLUSION: