Jan HW

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FRI Jan 31 ELA HW

Complete Act 2-sided worksheet to collect BEST quotations to use from Scene 5 for possible future essay on character trait contrasts and arguments for change. If you did the last 2 night's work correctly you only need to look at the packet answers and margin notes to have all the info you need to fill this out in 10-15 minutes.

Worksheet copy is posted below.

TIP FOR FINAL CHARACTER TRAIT boxes on YOUNG BUSINESS MAN SCROOGE: Use a QUOTE that where Younger Scrooge with Belle says something cold and unemotional but explain how the older Scrooge is showing a change in trait by how he reacts.

2020 Act I sc 4-5 trait squares and argument.docx

Daily Class Notes Jan 31

GHOSTLY SYMBOLISM:

1. Students worked in small groups to complete the FINAL page of the Act I Scene 5 packet. They worked to find connections between details in the Ghost of the Past's appearance and the ghost's purpose in Scene 5. We reviewed and clarified connections as a whole class. I cannot summarize the many details students discussed here. See me if you were out sick today or did not understand the discussion. Students SHOULD have added to their notes as the whole class discussed things they might NOT have written down.

2. I checked in with individual students on strengths and weaknesses in their homework. I reviewed responses to question 3, 4,6, 9 and 10. I will enter a summary of some of the main points students need to add to their notes by SUNDAY. Students SHOULD have taken notes to correct their packets during class.

3. Some groups began the homework in class.


THURS Jan 30 ELA HW

Read, circle vocabulary , highlight and take notes in margins of Scene 5--reread and follow the directions on page 4 to be sure you are focusing on the correct topics.

THEN complete pages 4-6 of the Act I Sc 4-5 packet. (You will only have the final page left to complete in class tomorrow. )

You MUST have highlights and notes BEFORE answering the questions or you will not have the best examples.

A file with a copy of the packet is inserted in yesterday's homework entry.

If you prefer to type answers on a downloaded file you may--just print it out before class.

Daily Class Notes Thurs. Jan 30

1. Students discussed difference between the words WELFARE and RECLAMATION--showing the importance of small differences in word choice.

  • When the ghost says he has come to attend to Scrooge's WELFARE--Scrooge interprets the word WELFARE to mean his general well-being--which Scrooge thinks of as having a good night's rest, enough food and shelter, but NOT happiness.
  • The ghost gets more specific and uses the word RECLAMATION--he will help Scrooge reclaim his EMPATHY and ABILITY to feel human emotion. It is not just about finding happiness--the Past also shows him moments of sadness and regret--which made him human.

2. We looked at a clip of a movie version of the Ghost of the Past that captures many of the supernatural contrasts of trying to show this old/young/strong/gentle/summer/winter light-filled ghost. Students compared how well the film gets the details right to what they saw be slowing down to visualize the passage.

In some classes a student put on a white robe, gold belt and sparkly crown to see how 3 small details can communicate a lot about the character's role as shedding bright light on feelings and memories Scrooge had blocked off and ignored.

3. I reviewed directions for scene 5 reading and questions. Students worked for the remainder of the period as I checked in with students individually on last night's homework.


WED Jan 29 ELA HW

Complete pages 2 and 3 of the Act I sc 4,5 packet. (below) Follow ALL directions for reading and highlighting and labeling BEFORE completing the page 3 worksheet.

A copy of the script is in One-Note in the Christmas Carol section if you did not take your copy home today.



2020 Act 1 sc 4 5 wksh and symbolism.doc

TUES Jan 28 ELA HW

NO HW UNLESS you did not insert a complete Workhouse PowerPoint into the One-Note Page titled "FINAL Workhouse PPT" in the Workhouses Section of One-Note.

ALSO be sure you completed EVERY "Your TURN" item in the WebQuest. This was due more than a week ago. You are getting a separate Web Quest research grade.

HANDED OUT: Sc 4/5 packet and script. Students put this is ELA binder. We did not get to it and will start it tomorrow.

DAILY CLASS NOTES TUES JAN 28

I reviewed and posted rubric and FCAs on board for final revisions to PPT. Students specifically directed to check for the following

CONTENT CHECK: Read each others slides and suggest any bullet points that might be slightly off-topic on one slide but which would be strong on a team-mate's slide.

Offer any additional ideas of something to add from your notes to another student's slides. Also discuss any quotes, pictures, or bullet points that do not seem to make a strong argument against workhouses and suggest deleting.

NO ONE touches another student's slide. If a student approves of a change, that student makes their OWN changes. No one has to accept a change if they disagree.

MECHANICS CHECK:

    • Be sure source citations include the source article TITLE and NAME OF WEBSITE. Use different or smaller font for source citations and put them in parenthesis so it is clear they are not part of the quote or caption.
    • Edit spelling--No spell check underlines should remain.
    • Check that you followed the "change y to i and and ending" rule for words like families, babies, tries.... (not family's, baby's trys).
    • Capitalize names of people or places--including your OWN name on the slide. Do NOT randomly capitalize words that are not proper nouns.

Students had the rest of the period to complete the project.

Last 5 minutes I led classes step by step through process to submit Projects by inserting them into One-Note in the correct place. EVERY MEMBER has to insert a copy of the project into THEIR One-Note Webquest section on the page titled "FINAL Workhouse PPT) .


MON Jan 27 ELA HW

Finish ALL slides for Group PPT. You will have about 10 minutes during class with your group to edit and finalize your project. Below is copy of revised FCAs and the grading rubric. It is similar to the posted rubric on the Day 5 page of the rubric, but I removed the separate Works Cited page requirement.


MON JAN 27 DAILY CLASS NOTES:

Students spent the period working on PPT slides after I briefly reviewed the diagram reminding them what to include on each slide.


FCAs and Rubric for PowerPoint Project.docx

THUR Jan 23 ELA HW

Complete at least 1 content slide for your group's PowerPoint. EACH group member must design 1 slide individually.

Other slides will be done together in class on Monday. The rubric and directions for the project are on Day 5 page in Workhouse Webquest One-Note section. Students should have shared a PPT for all to contribute a slide to.

COMPLETE PROJECT WILL BE DUE TUESDAY after students have 1 more class period to coordinate.

Below is the sample format to use to be sure you have ALL required info on your slide.

SAMPLE WORKHOUSE WEBQUEST SLIDE to use as model.docx

ENRICHMENT CIVIL RIGHTS CLASS:

Below is a file with a Template to follow to complete your project. Instructions are on the first slide. The next 3 slides have a format and directions for content on the rest of the information you will present on THURSDAY. AFTER completing an individual PowerPoint, you can then combine ideas and create a final submission on THURSDAY.

To download and copy the file, hover over the file below until you see an arrow. Click on the Pop out arrow to open the file. Once its open, click on the DOWNLOAD arrow symbol to Download and SAVE the file with a NEW name. Upload your completed PowerPoint to One-Drive OR share it with me after you have completed the content.

The template is ALSO accessible through TEAMS - (click on Enrichment 711 if you were in my Civil Rights class last term or 712 if you are assigned to me this term). Open the Civil Rights project One Note Class Notebook and look for the PowerPoint in the Instructions and Final Packet section.

I will be available AFTER SCHOOL tomorrow (WED) if you need help or want to work with your group in my room.

PowerPoint Template for Enrichment Project.pptx

Daily Class Notes WED Jan 23

I explained Workhouse Webquest directions on Day 5 page of Workhouse page in One-Note.

CHANGE TO RUBRIC and DIRECTIONS--NO Works Cited list required.

Students had period to:

  • Splinter in groups of 2 or 3
  • Review 5 reasons Workhouses are terrible from each group member and choose 5 strongest reasons for group project
  • Assign which student will prepare slide(s) for each of the 5 main topic reasons
  • Design and share a blank PPT for the group to work on in class and at home.
  • Students began inputting info from Web Quest to individual slide. If this ONE slide was not finished in class, it must be completed over the weekend.

I will answer questions by email. I will check for questions at around 3 pm Fri, Sat, and Sun.

WED Jan 22 HW

  1. Complete Day 5 top 5 reasons list in the Workhouse Web quest page in One-Note. The directions at the top of the web page have been changed slightly-

Day 5 directions are slightly changed from the wording on the DAY 5 page in One-Note. The changes are:

  • Complete the 5 points INDIVIDUALLY.
  • I made a mistake and inserted page numbers to show classes. Delete the page numbers I inserted and then insert YOUR page numbers.
  • Do NOT just copy and paste evidence on this page. The reasons MUST be in your own words. These statements will be used to write the titles of your 5 argument slides to convince Scrooge that Workhouses are not a good solution to poverty.
  • AFTER filling in your reasons and page numbers, READ the description and FCAs for the group work you will do tomorrow in class.
  • Complete any unfinished sections Day 1-4 of the Webquest.

Daily Class Notes TUES and WED JAN 21, 22

TUES:

1. Students took notes on Latin Roots for the vocabulary quiz. The roots mis and anthrop are in the vocab word misanthrope. The roots bene and volun are in the word benevolent. Knowing the roots helps with guessing meaning of other words with the same roots and will help students connect to the meaning of the words on the quiz. Students copied roots, meanings, and examples of other words with the roots into the Vocab section of their ELA binders. Notes on the roots lesson are in the file posted at the end of the TUES HW entry below.

2. Students used the remainder of Tuesday's class to complete Day 4 of the Webquest and finished for HW if needed.


WED: Students took Act I vocab quiz. If you were out, see me ASAP to take it during a 20 minute period this week or after school tomorrow (Thursday).

I reviewed slight change to Day 5 directions. The change is posted in the HW entry (above) for today.

After quiz students worked on Day 5 page in computer lab.


Tues. Jan 21 ELA HW

  1. STUDY!!! -Vocab quiz will be on Act I sc 1,2, and 3 words we did vocab cards for. You will need to know definitions (not exact but close to ones given in the script), Part of Speech (N,V, Adj) and be able to properly use each word in a sentence about I picture I will give you. Your graded vocabulary cards and the definitions in the script are your study guide.

Words are Solemnize, implore, morose, ponderous, covetous, destitute, impropriety, misanthrope, miser, benevolence, resolute.

Notes we took on ROOTS for extra credit items are in the file below.

2. Complete ANY undone sections of Workhouse Webquest Days 1,2,3 AND 4.

Handed Back: Remaining graded vocabulary cards for Act I.

Notes on ROOTS for Act I vocab quiz.docx

FRI JAn 17 HW

Complete the WebQuest Day 1,2, and 3.

  • I am available to answer emailed questions Friday and Monday from noon to 4.
  • I will not be checking it Tues, but I will add to it so finish today's chunk over the long weekend to avoid hw in addition to studying for the vocab QUIZ which will by next TUES's HW.

WED: Jan 22--Vocab quiz will be on Act I sc 1,2, and 3 words we did vocab cards for. You will need to know definitions (not exact but close to ones given in the script), Part of Speech (N,V, Adj) and be able to properly use each word in a sentence about I picture I will give you.

Words are Solemnize, implore, morose, ponderous, covetous, destitute, impropriety, misanthrope, miser, benevolence, resolute.

HANDED BACK: VOCAB CARDS. If I did not get yours back to you, see me TUESDAY.

Daily Class Notes FRI Jan 17

1. COLLECTED: Sc 3 scripts and Argument quote packets from all classes. Get me missing work on TUES. (Orange class--I did not collect scripts but will check them on Tues.

2. Led students through Day 3 of the Workhouse Webquest section of One-Note.

  • Students should already have completed all of the BLUE directions for Days 1 and 2.
  • I showed video clips on bottom half of page, discussed as a class, and then and students wrote a brief, bullet-point note about what they saw under each of the links. At the BOTTOM of the page, students then wrote the 2 sentence summary of something that they learned from the video clips that might convince Scrooge that the poor need more sympathy and help. Students can click on the links to re-watch to understand better or if they want to use a visual or fact for the final PowerPoint project on this research.
  • I walked students through the TOP of the Day 3 section of the Webquest to show them how to navigate the POWYS site. Students click on the 3 questions to learn more about work, health, punishments in work houses.

EVERYTHING you need to know is written on the page, so reread and follow directions to complete the day's work.

Thursday Jan 16 HW

1. Complete the Act I sc 3 Logos, ethos , pathos packet and script markup. (See yesterday's entry for details and file to print any needed material you may be missing.)

2. FINISH any undone portions of Day 1 or Day 2 of the Workhouse Webquest in One-Note. REREAD directions for each of the activities in Blue Font to be sure you completed all required sections correctly.

Daily Class Notes THURS Jan 16

Students logged onto laptops and opening the Workhouse Webquest section of One-Note. We worked on Day 1 and Day 2 entries.

    • I had students scroll through Day 1 and pointed out what to check for in each section to make sure you have clear and complete answers.
    • The web quest will be graded using the Research Rubric in the Section once all 5 Research days are complete. Don't fall behind.
    • I explained how to do the 2 sources on the Day 2 page. Finish the Day 2 page for homework if not done in class.


WED Jan 15 HW

Act I Scene 3 reading markup and packet of quotations and questions DUE FRIDAY. BEGIN TONIGHT! If you forgot your hard copies, the file with the packet is below and the script is in the A Christmas Carol Section of One NOTE. Look in Daily Class Notes section from MONDAY for files that review on the lesson about Logs/Ethos/Pathos.

  1. Finish Reading Act I scene 3 if not done in class (p.10-halfway through p. 13.)
  2. As you read or reread, highlight or underline examples of Logos Pathos and Ethos as directed in the Homework packet and as we did in class. In the margin, LABEL each line you highlight as LOGOS/ETHOS and/or PATHOS. . THERE MUST BE at least 2 examples on EACH page. Some lines may show more than 1 of the 3 ways to argue.
  • There are 3 typos in the Act I Sc 3 packet. I attached a file with the correct language so your quotations will make sense.

2. Complete the 4 pages of the homework packet to copy out the best Logos, pathos, and ethos examples you found and marked in the script margins. I will NOT accept the packet if you have not marked up the script to show you read and found several examples before choosing the 2 best examples of Marley using ETHOS, PATHOS and LOGOS to convince Scrooge to consider changing.

3. Quiz on Act I sc 1,2,and 3 vocab next WEDNESDAY. You will need to know definitions (in your own words is fine); PART OF SPEECH!!! and be able to use the words in sentences to respond to a picture prompt I give you.


2020 Act I sc 3 argument text quotes.docx


Typos to correct are highlighted in yellow.docx


Daily Class Notes Wed Jan 15

1. Reviewed that vocab quiz will be an 22 and review after school Jan 21. Topics listed in HW above.

2. Watched short scene with Marley from movie version to see sensory description brought to life.

3. Continued performing Act I sc 3 and highlighting or underlining lines the show Marley using LOGOS/ETHOS/PATHOS to get Scrooge to listen. Labeled in margins of script so students know WHY they highlighted.

4. Students ALL were Marley using PATHOS--passionate tone--to try to get through to Scrooge that"MANKIND WAS [HIS] BUSINESS!!CHARITY, MERCY FORBEARANCE, BENEVOLENCE" was his BUSINESS.

5. Stopped to clarify difficult vocabulary as we read and discuss meaning of key speeches. Students SHOULD have taken notes as we discussed.

6. Any class that did not finish the entire scene, (ends halfway through page 13) needs to finish reading and markup for Homework and begin packet.


TUES Jan 14 HW

No NEW homework today.

The Marley's argument packet will not be due until FRIDAY. We need to read all of scene 3 and take notes on how Marley argues using Logos, Ethos, and Pathos before selecting the STRONGEST quotations to fill in the packet. If you want to get ahead of the class, you may read scene 3 on your OWN and continue marking up examples of L, P, and E on EVERY page BEFORE entering any examples into the packet.

NEXT QUIZ will be WED Jan 22 on Act I sc 1,2, and 3 vocabulary.

  • Review session next Tues Jan 21 after school .
  • It will ask you to give definition and write sentences using the words. Your vocabulary cards are your study guide.

STUDENTS HANDED IN Act I sc 3 VOCABULARY CARDS and Character Trait SQUARES HOW for students who I had not checked yesterday.

Handed BACK: Act I sc 1,2 Vocab cards from students I had not checked in class. Make changes if I made notes on your card so you have correct info to study from for vocab quiz Jan 22.

Daily Class Notes TUES Jan 14

I reviewed common errors in vocabulary card sentences. If you were out or did not understand, stay after tomorrow. I cannot go into depth here. The error topics I covered included:

1. Students had trouble using Abstract (idea) Nouns such as impropriety and benevolence correctly in sentences. I used concrete and yarn to illustrate the difference between concrete nouns (person, place, thing) and abstract nouns (names for ideas, thoughts, etc.) Abstract nouns include words like thought, dream, kindness, education.

  • A writing trick that often helps you use abstract nouns correctly in a sentence is to use the vocabulary word with
    • a possessive (his, hers, its, your,etc) (Her impropriety during the assembly led to a detention. )
    • show (She showed benevolence when she gave the hungry kid her lunch.)
    • with (She responded to the child's anger with benevolence, giving him candy and a second chance.)

2. We noted that ponderous has the root PONDER meaning to think. Even though you MAY use the word ponderous to describe a physically heavy load, it is more often used to describe a MENTAL or EMOTIONAL WEIGHT OR BURDEN.

  • On the test, use the word that way. (His guilt about ruining his brother's sneakers was a ponderous burden. After MCAS, she felt like a ponderous weight of stress had been lifted.)

3. Miser and misanthrope name kinds of PEOPLE. USe as nouns, not adjectives.

  • The MISER never shared a penny with anyone else.
  • The misanthrope never attended a party and hated small talk.
  • It is EASY to use noun vocabulary words at the beginning of a sentence as the subject and then just follow with a verb and clue to meaning.
  • 4. Destitute means very poor people. You CANNOT write "They lived in destitute." That would mean "They lived IN poor people."
  • Correct use as a noun: The DESTITUTE need things most of us take for granted.

SECOND portion of class we continued reading and acting out Act I scene 3.

  • We reviewed the handout I gave a while back on HOW TO READY STAGE DIRECTIONS
  • As we read we took notes in the margin of the script on how Marley uses Logos, Ethos, and Pathos in his argument to get Scrooge to think about changing.
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MON Jan 13 HW

ALL classes: Complete the 4 vocabulary cards for Act I sc 3 words (misanthrope, miser, ponderous and benevolence). Follow all directions and the format you used for Act I sc 1 and 2 words. You can print blank cards from the file I inserted last MONDAY Jan 6.

  • NOTE: Since misanthrope and miser are in the SAME sentence in the script, you may copy the sentence from the script that contains BOTH misanthrope and miser onto ONE of the cards and write SEE OTHER CARD for part V. B. on the other card.
  • Be sure your sentences use the words as the correct Part or Speech.

ORANGE CLASS AND the many students who did not do the weekend HW-- finish the character trait squares packet--all 4 pages. Open file from FRIDAY's HW if you do not have the handout.

Lesson from today is summarized in the PowerPoint below today's handouts.

HANDED OUT:

Rhetorical Triangle graphics to explain argument

"How Effective are Marley's Arguments" Packet with directions for markup (in class) of Act I sc 3 to find examples of how Marley uses argument. Packet will be due THURSDAY or FRIDAY depending on how far we get in class tomorrow.

Files are below.


2020 Act I sc 3 argument text quotes.docx
rhetorical triangle pdf.png
2020 ACT I SC 3 ARG LESSON.pptx

Daily Class Notes Mon Jan 13

See the PowerPoint above for the agenda and lesson from today.

THURS and FRI Jan 9 and 10 HW

Different HW for Different classes. Read carefully.

ORANGE:

  1. Due MON: Finish Webquest Day 2 : Complete reading the 3 letters and highlighting as directed. Then Complete the Journal Letter response to the letter writer (Mrs. Pankhurst, Mr. Copeman, or Mrs. Robbins) following the directions in blue on the page. DO NOT do the Poster exercise at the bottom of the page yet.
  2. Character trait squares packet for Act I sc 1 and 2 due TUES
  3. Vocabulary cards for Act I sc 3 due TUES. CHUNK THE WORK DUE TUESDAY and get some done over the weekend.

Green:

  1. Character trait squares packet for Act I sc 1 and 2 due MON.
  2. Vocabulary cards for Act I sc 3 due TUES.
  3. No One-Note Workhouse WEQUEST work due UNLESS you did not complete the section asking for highlighting and paraphrasing of the Marsha Perry article (Source 2) .

YELLOW, BLUE, RED:

  1. Finish all of DAY 1 prompts (in blue) in One-Note Workhouse WEQUEST (Most students were finishing the short news article about the Poor Law and what at least one person quoted in Source 3 said about it. Read and follow ALL directions in BLUE FONT on the page.
  2. Character trait squares packet for Act I sc 1 and 2 due MON.
  3. Vocabulary cards for Act I sc 3 due TUES.

Files with Character Trait squares can be reprinted from the file below.

I inserted the script into ONE-NOTE in the Christmas Carol Section if you left a script at school.

Scroll down to Tuesday's HW if you need Vocabulary card instructions, new copies of the blank formatted Vocabulary cards or the sample finished card.

2020 Act I Sc 1and 2 character squares.docx

Thurs and Fri Jan 9 and 10 Daily Class Notes

I reviewed the Character Trait Squares packet with classes. Students did the FIRST page together in groups to have as a model for how to do the rest. Follow the SAME process for the other 3 pages.

Step 1: skim through script and highlight or underline at least 3-4 examples of text or stage directions that show traits of Scrooge, Bob Cratchit, and Fred.

  • In the MARGIN--briefly label the character and trait (Ex: next to "He was secret, and self-contained, and solitary as an oyster" on p 4, students wrote Scrooge=antisocial. )

Step 2: Review your highlighted or underlined lines and margin notes and choose the STRONGEST examples to enter at least 2 pieces of evidence onto the character trait square boxes on the packet.

  • Be careful to list traits for ONE character listed at the top of the page on each page.
  • Do not use the words MEAN or NICE as trait words--improve your vocabulary to be more specific--kind, benevolent, generous, social, friendly, caring, determined, persistent, cruel, intimidating, cold, harsh, uncaring, timid, etc.

ALL pages in the packet are due on MONDAY! (Except ORANGE class which has until TUES.)

ALL classes went to lab for part or all of a period on Thurs/Friday and most have completed DAY 1 parts of the Workhouse Webquest. If you were out,

  • read the information and follow the directions in blue font to identify and show you understand the sources you will end up using to create a PowerPoint about the most powerful information that would convince Scrooge that Workhouses are NOT a great idea.
  • The PowerPoint work will be done in groups after we FINISH all 5 days of the webquest.


WED Jan 8 HW

NO HOMEWORK unless you need to revise your vocabulary cards to meet the requirements or have clearer sentences as we discussed in class today.

We did NOT get far enough with the Web-quest so you do NOT have to do ANYTHING on the web-quest tonight.

DAILY CLASS NOTES --WED Jan 8

1. Mrs. Glass and I CHECKED some Act I sc 1 and 2 vocabulary cards and pointed out revisions that many students might want to make. Students given time to make changes before recheck tomorrow.

2. WRITE LIKE DICKENS--Participle fun!

We reviewed VERY basic grammar information to learn how label words in a sentence by their PURPOSE. That is all that grammar is! If we think of words as TOOLS to build better sentences, know WHICH part of speech is like knowing the correct TOOL to make sentences work better.

Nouns=name people, places, things and ideas

Verbs = express ACTION or being (what the noun DOES in a sentence)

Adjectives = DESCRIBE (most often they describe NOUNS)

Adverbs = words to describe HOW a verb is done (they do other things as well, but this is the most BASIC way to understand them--they ADD to the VERB==adverb.)

PARTICIPLES are MAGICAL--they take a VERB, add ing or ed, and then use it to DESCRIBE a noun. That turns it into and adjective. I modeled this by wearing different hats. Using the VERB hat, I skipped--showing action. Then--changing into my ADJECTIVE hat I used the same root verb but morphed into the SKIPPING TEACHER. Skipping now DESCRIBES a person.

VERBS are the strongest tools in writing because ACTION draws a reader in. If you can include ACTION in the DESCRIBING word it creates a more VIVID picture in a description.

DIckens and Participles: We examined where Dickens described Scrooge with a PILE of PARTICIPLES followed by 2 adjectives and FINALLY the noun!

He was "a squeezing, wrenching, grasping, scraping, clutching, covetous old sinner."

The NOUN is SINNER (A way more precise noun than MAN by the way). The verbs squeeze, wrench, grasp, scrape, clutch are all turned into adjectives to describe Scrooge by adding the ING ending and putting them in front of the noun. ALSO notice how Dickens puts the verb that begins with a C next to the adjective Covetous to create alliteration!

Part of Dickens' distinctive style is that he uses LOTS of words. We copied his style, but did not go QUITE as far and came up with descriptions of other nouns preceded by only THREE participles and ONE adjective. Below are some of the creative examples students thought of:

  • Write like Dickens

A screaming, bellowing, raging, spitting, lying, crooked politician.

A snickering, leering, clawing, sadistic genius

A evading, hurdling, hurdling, sprinting, fearless, player

A hissing, spitting, slithering, venomous snake

A creeping, stalking, lingering, sly criminal

A wriggling, barking, panting, playful BALL OF FUR

A experimenting, inventing, murdering, malevolent, mad scientist.

A jumping, juking, soaring, spinning, dancing MVP quarterback

A sneaking, scheming, stealing, lying, plotting, evil criminal

The manipulating, profiting, convincing, rich businessman


3. Some classes read the New Years poems attached below and noted how many writers can write about the same TOPIC ( CHANGE) and come from different perspectives with different tones and tools.

(TO view the poems, you need to download or click on OPEN IN GOOGLE docs on the file below because the formatting does not hold in the preview view. )

We shared a few tricks to help students not be scared of poetry and to help you UNPACK A POEM:

  • Always pay attention to the title! The titles "To the New Year" and Burning the Old Year" tell the reader the topic and tone difference in each poem before you read a word!
  • Notice the poets OFTEN begin by zooming in on a very small detail (a note on fire, the first bit of light reaching down from the sky on the first morning of the year, ringing bells and a night sky....) to make a bigger point about life near the END of the poem. (A new year is a fresh chance to start again, to see possibilities before us, to bring peace to the world or just OUR little place in the world...)
  • Poems paint pictures to make us make connections to WAY more than is directly told. Poems can be puzzles to make up think, but when we dig in--they often say much more to us in very personal ways than longer genres of writing.
  • ALWAYS read a poem twice and out loud if possible. The SOUNDS of the flow help with understanding and enjoying the meaning.

4. SOME classes had time to go to the computer lab to view the Web quest and have a short tour of the directions. We will work on a webquest over several days and portions of classes.



New Years poetry.docx

TUESDAY Jan 7 HW

  1. Act I Sc 1 and 2 vocab cards DUE. Directions and model format are in the file below. If you do not print out formatted blanks, just be sure each section of what you HAND-WRITE is labeled as I labeled it on the model form. NO printing in class! If you do them on-line, print them at HOME tonight or during homeroom tomorrow.

I. word

II. Part of speech

III Def

IV. picture or example

V. Sentences

a p#

b Dickens' sentence

c YOUR sentence

2020 Act I vocab cards.docx
2020 Sample Act I vocab card.docx

DAILY CLASS NOTES TUES JAN 7

1. Reviewed vocab deadline

2. NEXT steps differed in different classes.

ALL classes finished performing Act I scenes 1 and 2 and highlighting and labeling some lines the show important traits of Fred, Bob and Scrooge. We will use these lines as evidence in a future essay.

RED CLASS ONLY: read the poem "Ring Out Wild Bells" and noted lines that Fred might think vs lines that Bob might think and related to the lines to evidence from the script. Other classes will do this tomorrow.

GREEN class: After reviewing character traits or SCROOGE that were directly TOLD in Act I sc 1, we noted these traits are SHOWN by action and dialogue in Sc 2. Students finished acting out the scene and marked up the script to note some lines that showed traits.

YELLOW, BLUE and RED class: Shelfish similes

Orange, GREEN and Blue: Zoomed in on the simile from Scene 1 in which Kate describes Scrooge as "Secret and self-contained and solitary as an oyster." We then looked at videos of oysters, clams, and scallops and made our OWN comparisons of "Traits" of shellfish to connect to Scrooge, Fred, and Bob Cratchit. Students discussed with peers and wrote at least one comparison down for each character in the Writing Section of the ELA binder to use in FUTURE similes we will write.

Students noted that a simile that stretches our brains and makes us think of multiple connections is not only fun to read, but says a LOT in a few words. Comparing seemingly UNLIKE things is powerful!


ORANGE, YELLOW, RED: Had lesson on PARTICIPLES (verbs that become adjectives) and how they can improve writing. I will post a brief summary of this lesson TOMORROW after all classes have had it. SEE ME during the 20 minutes or after school tomorrow if you were absent because a brief post will not be enough to review the topic.


Monday Jan 6 HW

  1. Act I Vocab hw due WED is in file below. Do AT LEAST 3 cards tonight if you have not yet started it. CHUNK the work or you'll be rushing and not learn anything. If you work on-line you MUST print out the cards so you have a hard copy for me to check in class WED. I WILL NOT allow students to print in class or go back to lockers for reasons I have reviewed a hundred times. Come to class prepared.

The file with directions and blank formatted cards is below, followed by a sample card for the word SOLEMNIZED to use as a model.

2. If you were one of the people who received an email that you need to put your Harrison Bergeron ending in the Writing Folder section of One-Note, do so TONIGHT and then send me an email that you have inserted it for me to grade. See me during the 20 minutes tomorrow or after school if you have a problem or need to rewrite.

2020 Act I vocab cards.docx
2020 Sample Act I vocab card.docx

DAILY CLASS NOTES MON JAN 6

1. Reviewed the following in each class

  • Students got new seats (1st period was interrupted by assembly and will get this tomorrow)
  • Students who need to insert Harrison Bergeron Ending into One-Note Writing Folder were told to do so and respond to the email I sent asking for it.
  • Students reminded of WED Vocab card deadline and where to check on-line for directions and model card.
  • I COLLECTED any paragraphs about what to Let In, Let go, or Love about 2020 from students who had not finished in class Friday.

2. NEXT steps differed in different classes.

ALL classes:

  • Reviewed differences between Bob and Fred from Act I, Scenes 1 and

BOB Crachit: kind-gives money for poor; optimistic-thinks Scrooge actually is "warmed by" Fred's visit; timid--acts scared of Scrooge.

FRED: kind-speaks of Christmas as chance to remember we are all the same and should help each other; Strong and determined--keeps asking Scrooge to dinner and will not lose temper when Scrooge tries to intimidate him; realistic-tells Cratchit that he doubts Scrooge liked the visit.

ORANGE CLASS ONLY: read the poem "Ring Out Wild Bells" and noted lines that Fred might think vs lines that Bob might think and related to evidence from the script. Other classes will do this tomorrow. Went to assembly.

GREEN class: After reviewing character traits or SCROOGE that were directly TOLD in Act I sc 1, we noted that the same traits are SHOWN by action and dialogue in Sc 2. Students finished acting out the scene and marked up the script to note some lines that showed traits.

YELLOW, BLUE and RED class: Shelfish similes

Did the above AND zoomed in on the simile from Scene 1 in which Kate describes Scrooge as "Secret and self-contained and solitary as an oyster." We then looked at videos of oysters, clams, and scallops and made our OWN comparisons of "Traits" of shellfish to connect to Scrooge, Fred, and Bob Cratchit. Students discussed with peers and wrote at least one comparison down for each character in the Writing Section of the ELA binder to use in FUTURE similes we will write.

Students noted that a simile that stretches our brains and makes us think of multiple connections is not only fun to read, but says a LOT in a few words. Comparing seemingly UNLIKE things is powerful!

We then continued reading the script and will finish Scene 2 tomorrow in all classes.





Friday Jan 3 HW

1. COMPLETE the paragraph on something you'd let in, let go, or love in 2020. See file with handout "Ring out the old..." below if you did not finish in class or were out today.

2. Vocab hw due NEXT WED is in file below if you want to start it. I STRONGLY suggest doing 2 cards over the weekend, 2 Mon, and 2 TUES.

If you work on-line PRINT cards to keep in your ELA binder Voc section and to practice with in class. Finish the card for the word solemnized that we started in class if your class did not get to all sections.

3. Extra credit option for sharing book recommendations is in file below. Click and read for details.

HANDED OUT: files below.

New Years writing prompt.docx
2020 Act I vocab cards.docx
2020 Sample Act I vocab card.docx
New Years poetry.docx

Daily Class Notes Friday Jan 3

1. I reviewed extra credit opportunity to write and share book blurbs. The form and directions are in file above. You may due up to 2 blurbs for extra credit per term, but you can do more just to share good book recommendations. The BOOK BLURB format is in the EXTRA CREDIT section of THIS website.

2. We reignited our writing muscle by writing a 5 minute paragraph about something we identified to let in, let go, or love in 2020. I shared tips on how to get past writing paralysis. Notes are on the handout in the file above. Most students passed this in. Some need to finish and turn in on MONDAY.

3. Reviewed each direction for doing vocabulary cards for new words from A Christmas Carol. Full directions are in the file and handout I gave in class. The format to use for ALL cards is on the back of the Act I vocabulary instructions page. A completed SAMPLE card for the word solemnized is attached as a file above in the HW box.

Thursday Jan 2 HW

No HW---yet!! Vocab cards will be due next WED and I posted instructions and the format for these cards in the file with FRIDAY hw.

DAILY CLASS NOTES Jan 2

1. Reviewed 2 recommendations for independent reading: Both are easy reads--engaging, realistic characters that you will recognize from your own life. They face problems that make you think, make you laugh, and make you care. I read them over break and hope you may have your own suggestions. I will offer a little extra credit if you want to write about a novel or even a magazine you recommend. I will post a format for submitting a summary and recommendation.

  • WIldfire by Rodman Philbrick (Survival, action adventure in Maine)
  • Rated by Melisss Grey (Contemporary issues among teens of all types who are victims of a harsh system of ratings that runs everyone's lives. You will recognize yourself and probably 2-3 of your friends in these characters.)

2. Let IN; Let GO: Love for 2020--Students recorded something to LET IN to thier lives, to LET GO of to release feelings, memories, behaviors that hold you back or make you feel unnecessarily stressed, and identify what you LOVE to help focus on what's important to you. Students shared choices anonymously on post-its.

3. Read more of Act I, Sc 2 of A Christmas Carol. Students will focus on the THEMATIC TOPICS BELOW as you read. We will highlight and "collect" evidence from the text that shows how DICKENS might be trying to get readers to think about---

  • CHANGE: Is change possible? Why is it so hard? What motivates even the hardest cases to WANT to change? What is needed for people to make sacrifices or uncomfortable choices to truly change?
  • IGNORANCE and POVERTY: What kinds of ignorance does Dickens examine by showing what Scrooge IGNORES? Does Ignorance cause poverty or does poverty cause ignorance? What is Scrooge ignorant of that causes HIM to suffer, and OTHERS to suffer?