Greg's Overall Feedback
Two very good pieces of work for this project exploring am important theme, intelligently and imaginatively.
I feel more reading for the short story would have given you a better insight into this medium and helped you in the planning. Both pieces show great ambitions and I am sure will help in the development of future drafts and other work in these mediums
The project demonstrates and deep understanding of both mediums
The planning and preparation of show a strong understanding of the writer’s journey and displays an impressive knowledge of the mediums and how to begin to create the two pieces.
Each step and decision is eloquently and diligently reflected upon – lots of insightful and intelligent decision and solutions along the way demonstrating your writer’s journey effectively
Planning
Comprehensive understanding and knowledge of subject context used to communicate complex concepts, articulate ambitions and clarify purpose.
Research
Independently identified, thorough and sustained research and investigation of a range of relevant sources, insightful interpretation and synthesis of information used to inform, support and develop ideas
Production
In depth understanding and aesthetic awareness, imaginative and flexible processes, skills and knowledge applied in extensive enquiry to develop creative solutions.
Evaluation
Accomplished and professional communication of perceptive analysis and interpretation, demonstrating clarity and sophistication in thinking and maturity in decision making to progress ideas.