Unit 12 - RESEARCH PROJECT

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Some strong primary research but would have liked more depth in the evaluations of the interviews - what specifically did you learn and how will that impact on your own writing and journalism

The second interview is much better and articulates definite impact form the advice given. 

The evaluation questions are a very useful tool - and gives easy access to reader. Excellent.  

Strengths and Weaknesses of magazines is purposeful and detailed - excellent work. some invaluable analysis of the secondary research articulated effectively. 

 maybe talk to people who work in the fashion magazine  - you can do this during the FMP process

 the content must be tailored to the interests and emotional needs of the audience 

Your findings are outstanding and effectively written - great job

 how my final project could incorporate both print and digital formats to cater to a wider audience 

perfect research finding - proves and gives evidence of your journey - wonderful and a joy to read. 

I am excited to experiment with different editorial and design elements to create a compelling and dynamic publication. Wonderful!!! I like the spirit of your evaluation and the engagement in the process - 

Specifically, I would like to explore the technical elements of magazine publishing, including how layout and design decisions impact audience engagement. You can address this a spart of the pre-production and also in the presentation chapter. 

Critical analysis is very detailed and a good to excellent standard

The research planning demonstrating your ideas methods and instruments to inform your project is very detailed and excellent standard

You have identified and evaluated an excellent range or sources/research activities to answer your questions and the evidence is of a very high standard

You have evaluated the sources to an excellent standard

The level of academic conventions and the presentation is very detailed and of a excellent standard