Drafts
drafts
On this page, there are drafts of chapter plannings, and on the individual parts, there's scenes that got scrapped from the book but were written out to some extent anyway. Enjoy!
Chapter Planning for Part Two
chapter ideas:
normani’s birthday
valentine’s day
girls getting accepted to colleges
christmas party
dinah and lauren’s friendship (beginning to when they met the others)
dinah and lauren meeting
them talking about the future (lauren’s tattoo, nose piercing, their 40 year plan, dinah coming out to lauren and lauren coming out to dinah)
camila’s career
camila checks out her youtube over the summer and sees her video got a good amount of views and comments
camila rids her instagram of everything after their breakup and looks toward a fresh start
camila keeps singing on her youtube and gets a following
shawn decides to drop out and pursue music because he got a deal (camila supports it but hates it)
camila gets a record deal but decides to wait on it so she can graduate
one of camila's covers gets shouted out by taylor swift
camila graduates and releases her album on january 12th 2017/23 (she's advised to not come out by her label)
camila meets normani in nyc sometime before her label comes out but after havana comes out
lauren and normani in nyc
lauren getting her nose pierced and tattoo (include her bitching about her neck hurting and mani’s like i don’t want to hear about your time in the bedroom)
normani and lauren find an apartment
normani watches lauren and camila become distant
normani rips lauren off the couch after her breakup and takes her out of the apartment
lauren and normani hear havana at a bar
normani tells lauren about running into camila in nyc
lauren and camila get back together
normani and lauren discuss moving back to miami after graduation
camila and lauren’s relationship
camila and lauren talk about lauren going to nyc
lauren leaving for nyc
celebrating their one year over facetime
lauren hanging out with normani and ignoring camila's texting her
they decide to break up (october)
havana comes out
camila's album release (signing tour) and seeing lauren again
camila and lauren being friends again but not getting together
dinah in california
dinah moves to lucy’s apartment
she dorms with zendaya
Chapter Outlines for Part Two
where “love is in the air”
dinah and normani hang out at the mall
dinah talks to lucy
camila and lauren have a valentine’s date of pizza and movies
group chat texting
where there’s mistletoe
camila and lauren hang out at camila’s
norminah fight over how to host
they host the party
normani and dinah get drunk and kiss
where dinah and lauren become friends
dinah and lauren meeting
lauren has her first kiss
graduating middle school
dinah comes out to lauren
lauren comes out to dinah
dinah and lauren talk about their futures
dinah loses her virginity
dinah and lauren have sex
where laurminah get accepted
dinah lauren and normani get accepted into nyu
dinah gets accepted to ucla (doesn’t tell anyone)
lauren tells camila
dinah writes her letter to lauren (the day before she goes to lauren’s to sleep over the last time)
where dinah’s gone
normani calls lauren and camila over
camila goes home and sees the koala on her bed and loses it
lauren refuses to open her letter and leaves it on her nightstand
normani goes up to dinah’s room after a couple of days and pokes around, eventually finding dinah’s beyonce hoodie and the black shirt that normani stole all the time / ally comes in after to comfort her
where lauren turns eighteen
where they’re in new york
Original Part Three Conception
concept for the sequel:
dinah leaves florida and moves to california
normani and lauren go to nyu
- lauren majors in pre law
- normani majors in fashion design
camila and lauren break up some point in camila’s senior year
camila works on her music and posts it online, eventually she gets picked up by a label
2022, camila works with a label and by the end of the next year she has it produced and she picks up enough traction for a debut at number one
camila and lauren get back together two months before camila’s album releases
normani picks up modeling gigs and gets some fame because of that, which only amplifies as she picks up better gigs. she stays in school, though and gets her degree
dinah hears camila’s song on the radio at some point in 2023 and looks her up
dinah finishes school and moves back to miami, somewhere along the line she decides to visit clara
lauren and camila move in together in new york but move back after lauren’s done with pre law and finishes her degree in miami
possibly a conversation with camila and dinah and dinah talks about camila’s fandom
Part Four Brainstorming
ideas:
dinah and mani have angry sex before they figure everything out ✅
lauren goes to the er with normani because she cut herself while making food and dinah treats her ✅
camila goes back to la ✅
lauren goes back to nyc for school ✅
michael meets seth at soccer and dinah runs into one of her siblings
lauren doesn’t want to be a lawyer anymore and goes through a depressive episode ✅
normani and dinah have a conversation about church (dinah’s absence of faith and normani’s adoration of church) ✅
camila goes home after fighting with lauren and she and normani get drunk
“she’s a bitch” “don’t say that” “but she is. she made me fall in love with her. again. just to rip my heart out in pieces. again. she’s a bitch. but i love her. that’s not fair. why does she have to be so pretty?”
“why does she do this?” “do what?” “get drunk! this sucks. everything feels heavy and my head hurts and everything’s spinning. it’s not fun.”
camila ends up regretting it and is glad they stayed in and got drunk instead of in public bc she totally would’ve outed herself go mila
dinah proposes to normani in the moment
lauren comes home from new york and finds the ring on the counter ✅
"oh my god, you are not meeting my son with that fucking hickey on your neck"
open 65 w something about nala
Arc Finalizing
main events (rest of book)
p3:
dinah - seeing her mom again
lauren - stopping drinking and getting back on track
camila - helping lauren out and tour
normani - being officially with dinah
p4:
P4 BEGINS WITH CAMILA BEING OUTED
dinah - getting engaged
lauren - graduating law school
camila - coming out
normani - getting engaged