Writing Targets

How to Use this page

• Write the target(s) in your book based on the code you receive from the mock paper. See Explanation/Examples for details.

• Demonstrate in your book how you make the improvement, e.g. add a new sentence, or use a high level grammar.

• If it is about variety of language/structure, please write at least 1 sentence from here: Variety of language.

75 Word Essay

Sample essay

上个月我和家人一起去了北京。我非常喜欢这次旅行，因为北京很漂亮，而且有好吃的饭。但是去北京的人太多了。我喜欢安静的地方，比如Liphook。明年，我想和朋友一起去美国。

Last month I went to Beijing with my family. I really enjoyed the trip because Beijing is beautiful and has good meals. But there are too many people going to Beijing. I like quiet places like Liphook. Next year, I want to go to America with my friends.

125 Word Essay & Translation

Sample answer:

我住在一个小镇。虽然从小镇到伦敦坐火车只要半个小时，但是我不常去伦敦，因为火车票很贵。我喜欢我的小镇，因为它不仅有一个很大的购物中心，而且还有一个很大的电影院。我和我的朋友们常常去电影院看电影。

I live in a small town. Although it is only half an hour by train from the town to London, I don't go to London often because train tickets are very expensive. I like my town because it has not only a big shopping center, but also a big cinema. My friends and I often go to the cinema to watch movies.

虽然我喜欢我住的地方，但是将来我希望小镇上有一家日本餐厅，因为我喜欢吃日本菜。

Although I like where I live, in the future I hope there will be a Japanese restaurant in the town because I like Japanese food.