Content
- must be relevant
- Coverage: 4bp (7-10m); 3bp (5-6m); 2bp (3-4m); 1bp (1-2m)
- Clear communication: the more lapses, the lower the mark;
- Accept information that are plausible, even they may not mentioning the specific words
- The amount of information: (writes approximately 75 characters, clearly understandable and relevant to all four bullet points)
a lot (9-10m); quite a lot (7-8m); some (5-6m); little (3-4m); very little (1-2m)
- Opinions: two (7-10); one (3-6); like/dislike; positive or negative adj.; I think; ..
Quality
- variety of vocabulary (use of vocab from different topics/themes; synonyms; measure words; sophisticated words but no conspicuous repetition)
- complexity of structures and sentences (tenses; intensifiers; time markers; connectives; subordinate clauses; infinitive constructions) 得 structure; time clause (的时候;以后); sequence words (先,然后/再,最后); emphasis (是 … 的); disjunctive pronouns (妈妈送我去 … ;爸爸给我过生日) 对structure (对我影响很大)
- reference to time frames (3 time frames to score 5-6)
- accuracy of the language
- style and register
See more examples here: Variety of Language
Content
- relevant and detailed 2bp (13-15m); 1bp (12 or less)
- a lot of information (approximately 125 characters)
- opinion: 10-15m (at least two opinions are expressed and justified); 7-9m (at least two opinions are expressed); 4-6 (at least two opinions are expressed). If not opinion, max core is 3.
Range of language
- variety of vocabulary;
- variety of structures;
- complexity of sentences (use of subordinate clauses; use of relative clauses; use of infinitive constructions; the use of object pronouns within a sentence to lend greater fluency)
- fluency of the writing;
- style and register
Accuracy
- accurate (there may be a few errors in attempts at more complex language and occasion minor error); a minor error is one which has no bearing on communication;
- more accurate than inaccurate
- correctly formed verbs and tense formations
See more examples here: Variety of Language
Sample answer:
我住在一个小镇。虽然从小镇到伦敦坐火车只要半个小时,但是我不常去伦敦,因为火车票很贵。我喜欢我的小镇,因为它不仅有一个很大的购物中心,而且还有一个很大的电影院。我和我的朋友们常常去电影院看电影。
I live in a small town. Although it is only half an hour by train from the town to London, I don't go to London often because train tickets are very expensive. I like my town because it has not only a big shopping center, but also a big cinema. My friends and I often go to the cinema to watch movies.
虽然我喜欢我住的地方,但是将来我希望小镇上有一家日本餐厅,因为我喜欢吃日本菜。
Although I like where I live, in the future I hope there will be a Japanese restaurant in the town because I like Japanese food.
- at least 50 words
- key messages: 6m (13 ticks); 5m (11-12 ticks); 4m (8-10 ticks); 3 (5-7 ticks); 2m (3-4 ticks); 1 (1-2 ticks)
- would a native speaker understand the TL version without reference to the original English
- application of grammatical knowledge of language and structures (same as foundation tier)