A Theory on Tanka Writing

What is a tanka?

A tanka is a short poem of Japanese origin. It is traditionally written in a single unbroken line, but is now more commonly written in five lines, with 5, 7, 5, 7, and 7 syllables per line. The tanka is a free-verse poem, meaning that it does not have to rhyme, but it does have to follow a specific syllable pattern.

Tankas typically focus on nature, emotions, or fleeting moments in time. They often have a wistful or melancholic tone, and they often end with a twist or turn of phrase.

Sounds of young chidden
Outdoors, in the evening
Running around and laughing
Their voices - the real power
The future in the making

Moves in Tanka Poems

Tanka poems are traditionally broken down into three parts:

Context (5-7-5 or 17 syllables): This part sets the scene or introduces the subject of the poem.

Comment (7 syllables): This part offers a reflection or observation on the context.

Conclusion or Insight (7 syllables): This part provides a twist or turn of phrase, or offers a deeper insight into the meaning of the poem.

Here is an example of a tanka poem, broken down into its three parts:

Context:

Sounds of young children

Outdoors, in the evening

Running around and laughing

Comment:

Their voices - the real power

Conclusion:

Hope for the future

As you can see, the first line of the poem sets the scene with the sound of young children playing outdoors. The second line offers a reflection on the sound, suggesting that the children's voices are a source of power and hope. The third line provides a twist by suggesting that the children's laughter is a glimpse of hope for the future.