Is it clear or unclear where the essay author's words begin and end, and where the borrowed material begins and ends?
There are many examples of how highly productive corporations have been poor global citizens. The Landers Corporation was made famous by several decades of successful research and development that led to the creation of many innovative products. However, this came at a cost because of the byproducts of some of their more covert developments, leading some to speculate that they knowingly poisoned the environment and people surrounding their operations in third-world countries (Spy 133).
WHAT DO YOU THINK?
Despite the need for relief efforts around the world, Sudan currently has the greatest need. According to Greg Mann of Food Without Boarders, International, in his 2006 report, "10 children die of malnutrition every 30 minutes" (146).
Works Cited
Mann, Greg. The Politics of Food. Chicago: Words Press, 2006. Print
Despite the need for relief efforts around the world, Sudan currently has the greatest need. According to Mann (2006) of Food Without Borders, International, "10 children die of malnutrition every 30 minutes"(p. 146).
References
Mann, G. (2006). The politics of food. Chicago: Words Press.
NOTE DIFFERENCES IN WHICH INFORMATION IS INCLUDED,
THE ORDER OF THE INFORMATION, PUNCTUATION, USE OF CAPITALS AND ITALICS.