LTQT

9.can be fact, indirect quote, or a partial quote 

10.  put the most important facts first, make sure the story is accurate and sources are accurate, write short paragraphs, vary the sentence structure throughout the story, make sure the story is neat and double spaced, use transitions so your story flows, use active voice. 

11.  editorializing, using first and second person, messy handwriting, paragraphs too long, misspelling names, trying to use all of the information.