Writing a horror story by the 4e10

Here are the links to have a look at your horror stories.

We voted for the best story and here is the winner:

https://docs.google.com/viewer?a=v&pid=explorer&chrome=true&srcid=0B6HWkC-er8JtZDc5OTE0NzQtNzQ1Zi00M2ZlLThhYmEtZGRiNmE5MDM1ZDBl&hl=en

A horror story by Justine, Jessica, Alice and Marie:

The woman was in her bedroom. She was watching TV and eating pop corn. She was happy. While she was sleeping, she heard a creak in the stairs. It was thunder ! Sha panicked. She tried to run away but she couldn't. She decided to open the window and she shouted:

"HELP ME ! Help me !"

She heard a voice: " Shh ! The people can't help you ! Leave them alone !"

The lights were switching off and on all the time, the doors and the windows were opening and closing. There was a small earthquake. She managed to go out but her neighbour shot the woman and he ran to his car and drove away. The woman was dead...

https://docs.google.com/viewer?a=v&pid=explorer&chrome=true&srcid=0B6HWkC-er8JtMzY0NTgxNWYtNDU3Zi00ZmIwLTg2N2QtN2JiNmUzODc4OTU0&hl=en

https://docs.google.com/viewer?a=v&pid=explorer&chrome=true&srcid=0B6HWkC-er8JtZDEyYTExZmQtNTFjYy00YWJhLWIxODItOGU3ZGQ4YTliZTMy&hl=en

The strange house by Sarah and Nathalie:

Part 1 :There were 4 young girls who wanted to live together. They came to visit and buy the house.

Mona: "It's a very beautiful house."

Nina: "Yes, of course !"

Gabriella: "Whow ! There are beautiful flowers, and beautiful trees and it's sunny."

Laura: "Let's go and visit the house."

The 4 young girls loved the house.

Then they went to an amusement park.

Laura: "It's very funny !"

Nina: "yes, it is !"

Gabriella: "Yes, it's cool !"

Part 2 : They arrived to the house to rest. Suddenly they felt cold: flies were crawling all over the bedroom. The doors were opening and closing. The girls were scared.

Nina: " What's happening ?"

Laura: "I don't know !"

Voice: "GET OUT ! GET OUT !"

The girls: "Aaaah !"

Gabriella: "Help us ! Help us !"

Voice: "You will never go out."

Part 3 : It was really terrible. The house was alive. The house was haunted. The 4 young girls were prisoners of the haunted house.

Nina: "Hurry up, come this way... I see something."

Laura: "What is it ?"

Voice: "You have nothing to do here. It is my house."

Gabriella: "We have been in this house for a week. How can you ask us to go out ?"

Nina: "We have paid that house... now, it's ours, we can't move !"

Mona: "I am afraid... where is that voice coming from ?"

Part 4 : They decided to find where that voice was coming from. Laura found it in the hall and Mona found it in the kitchen. Gabriella found it in the bathroom and Nina found it in the dinner hall.

Mona: "Come on, come on quick everybody."

The 3 other girls called Mona and Gabriella ran up to the kitchen.

Laura: "This is a teddybear !!!"

Nina: "Oh it's strange ! We must take it and give it to the police."

Gabriella: "You are right !"

They all came back to their house to relax...

https://docs.google.com/viewer?a=v&pid=explorer&chrome=true&srcid=0B6HWkC-er8JtYjlmYjRlOGMtNjA4OC00M2NjLWEwNjYtOTc4Zjc4YzIyYTQz&hl=en

https://docs.google.com/viewer?a=v&pid=explorer&chrome=true&srcid=0B6HWkC-er8JtY2RkNTA3YzAtNzA2Mi00ZmViLTk5N2ItMTgyYzg0MjY2Njg4&hl=en

Here is an interesting link to help you write a fantastic story:

http://hrsbstaff.ednet.ns.ca/davidc/6c_files/documents/mysteries/divmysteries.htm

Thank you to Mr Lesert