Task 1 - Personal Narratives

Students begin the year by doing close readings of published personal narratives. We do mini-lessons on sensory language, and we do many short journal writes to prepare students for the larger task. We also read articles about the college admission essay. Students are then expected to go through the writing process, meaning they write at least three drafts, they peer edit, and they have their work edited by the teacher. Many students complete more than three drafts in order to create a polished piece of writing.

Sensory Language & Pre-Writing Work:

I Am Poem

I Am Poem Rubric

I Am Poem Reflection Questions

Sample Reflection Questions - 1

Sample Reflection Questions - 2

Sample Reflections Questions - 3

Show, Don't Tell

Sensory Language Notes

Sensory Language Review

Mentor Texts & pre-reading activities:

Shame by Dick Gregory

Dishing Dirt

Dishing Dirt Vocab Words

The Waiting

The Waiting Vocab Words

Articles:

Writing a Personal Narrative

Do's and Don'ts of the Admission Essay

Tackling the Dreaded College Essay

College Application Essay as Haiku

Peer Editing Review:

Austin's Butterfly

Austin's Butterfly Questions

Directions & Rubric:

Personal Narrative Directions & Question Options

Personal Narrative Rubric

Personal Narrative Checklist

Peer Editing and Revising

Final Draft Checklist

Personal Narrative Reflection

Teacher Example:

Ms. La Pan's Personal Narrative Example

2019-2020 Student Examples:

Personal Narrative - Kiana

Personal Narrative - Milin

Personal Narrative - Charlie

Personal Narrative - Antonia

Personal Narrative - Yordanzi

2018-2019 Student Examples:

Personal Narrative - Debbie

Personal Narrative - Jennifer

Personal Narrative - Kalis

Personal Narrative - Maddy

Personal Narrative - Miggy

Personal Narrative - Shay

Personal Narrative - Robbie

Personal Narrative - Giselle

Personal Narrative - Alma

2017-2018 Student Examples:

Personal Narrative - Kevin

Personal Narrative - Jarelis

Personal Narrative - Danexis

Personal Narrative - Kaleeah

2017-2018 Reflection Examples:

Reflection - Reign

2016-2017 Student Examples:

Personal Narrative - Anonymous

Personal Narrative - Angel

Personal Narrative - Darlaney

Personal Narrative - Anonymous 2

Personal Narrative - Anonymous 3

Personal Narrative - Palek

Personal Narrative - E'moni

2015-2016 Student Examples:

Personal Narrative - Mel

Personal Narrative - Sebastian

2015-2016 Reflection Examples:

Reflection - Mel

2014-2015 Student Examples:

Personal Narrative - Suheda

Personal Narrative - Tia

Personal Narrative - Steven

Personal Narrative - Shaelyn

Personal Narrative - Victoria

2014-2015 Reflection Examples:

Reflection - Shaelyn

Reflection - Jonah

Reflection - Ross

2013-2014 Student Examples:

Personal Narrative - Caitlin

Personal Narrative - David

Personal Narrative - Gabby J

UbD Unit Overview:

UbD Unit - Personal Narrative