Your essay can be used as a piece of formal writing.
Choose your best ONE Response, or ONE Connection - check your choice with teacher
Edit and Proof on paragraph check this with your teacherbefore proceeding
Look at the Exemplars
Remove intrusive errors (Random capitals, etc)
Use Grammarly
Punctuate correctly
Text titles - Italics and capital, eg Lord of the Rings
Structure
paragraphing (Max 250 words - this is long)
Have a catchy title and a formal title (see exemplars) underline and have capitals on key words
You must write in a formal register/style
Expand contractions (can't, she'll, etc)
Change slang (like = similar, things = aspects)
Write in 3rd person ('We' 'audience' and 'us' rather that 'me' 'I' and 'you')
Be specific: remove 'it' and 'they'
Introduce and punctuate quotes, eg: Kedis states, " We have a dream."
Modify the introduction and conclusion, if you change the number of texts you use
Your writing/ideas must be at Merit/Excellence level
Have a range of (Write That Essay) sentence styles (eg not just simple sentence starting with 'The' )
Be able to use colons (:) and semicolons (;)
Quote weaving
Sophisticated vocabulary