Research Data & Design MP2

This assignment was completed as a part of our senior capstone project. The objective was to put multiple aspects of our project such as the background research, goals, and comparisons to current similar products on the market together in a way that anyone could understand. From making and presenting this slideshow, I learned how to condense a lot of complex information effectively enough to the point where it still made sense but told all the information that it needed to. 

This presentation revealed that we were able to create a presentation that was easy to follow and not have too many elements that could potentially distract the audience. A major part of conducting research is being able to present it to others and this was a great way for us to do that. I appreciated this assignment because we had to present it multiple times, which not only allowed us to make it better after every trial, but also improve our presentation skills. 

The objective of this assignment is to see where our writing abilities are at the midway point of the school year. This assessment is to test our proficiency of going through multiple sources and finding enough information to create and support a defendable thesis. This gets compared to our writing assessment from the beginning of the year, to ensure improvement. 

This was an assignment that had some challenges due to the limited time that is allowed to complete it. I would improve this essay by including more body paragraphs to further develop my ideas. I would also try to incorporate some information from the third article to make my claims stronger.