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Sample 1
Draft 2 - Write improved version of story
Teacher's feedback:
Include speech and
answers to the question
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Sample 2
Draft 2 - Write improved version of story
Teacher's feedback:
Include speech, feeling and include topic - 'Standing up to bullies'
Sample 3Sample 3
Sample 3
Draft 2 - Write improved version of story
Teacher's feedback:
Improve conclusion to show how the character stood up to the bullies.
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