I liked about this book is that there is a lot of action in this book. For me, it is easier to picture something with a lot of action than a book that is all roses and love, stuff like that. I also liked that it is like the other book I also finished. That book feels like it is a follow up to this book, even though it's not.
I would change about this is I would make it have some fighting. I wouldn't want it to be all fighting, ut it would raise the action level. I would also change it to have more strategy.