Unit 5: Writing Recap
Lesson 1: Interviews and recording notes
Lesson 1: Interviews and recording notes
Step 1: Prepare
- Research
- Develop questions.
- 5Ws and H
Step 2: Develop questions
- Write down questions.
- Avoid YES/NO, general, leading, and feel questions
Step 3: Interview time
- Have a conversation and take notes on everything.
- Observe the room/setting you are in (put it in your notes)
Step 4: Take notes
- Audio recordings will work, but also take notes. Sometimes audio is hard to hear and transcribe.
- Direct quotes are the only thing you need to write word for word.
- Summarize other stuff.
Step 5: Make it a conversation
- Follow the path your questions mapped out.
- You can ask stuff not on your paper.
- If you hear something of importance that you did not consider right it done.
- Mark ALL important info
Step 6: Keep it fresh
- Transcribe while fresh in your mind
- Prepare to write while your notes are still fresh.
Assignment: Prepare Research
- Identify a story you are assigned to write for the yearbook.
- Decide who the sources for the story will be and list them.
- Then, write down what background research you will do.
Lesson 2: Writing copy and sidebars
Lesson 2: Writing copy and sidebars
Step 1: Find your story
- Focus on people
- Brainstorm ideas
- Talk to your peers, teammates, classmates, teachers
- Look at sample books
Step 2: Research
- Online, newspaper, statistic books, coaches, teachers, attend event
Step 3: Interview
- Be selective not convenient
Step 4: Write
- Freewrite in a word doc to get started
Step 5: Rewrite
- Read your freewrite, and then clean it up.
- Reorganize it for better flow, delete repetitive information.
Step 6: Proofread
Step 7: Make Corrections
Successful body
- Passive verbs
- Use quotes to accent the story. Quotes are not the story.
- Third person
- Use fewer words. DO NOT RAMBLE TO MAKE YOUR STORY LONGER!
The rest of the story
- Secondary coverage or sidebars allow yearbook staffs to combine design, graphics and words to present information in a visually interesting way. (see lesson 6 in PPT)
Assignment:
- Fill out spread planners (focus on angle and secondary coverage ideas).
- Select an angle, if you can, and start your research while the editor approves your plan
Lesson 3: Writing captions and headlines
Lesson 3: Writing captions and headlines
Step 1: Select pictures
- BE PICKY, not convenient and get them approved.
Step 2: Research and Interview
- What is going on in the picture?
- Who are the people? Talk to the people, they love to share their story and talk about themselves.
Step 3: Write
- Use a thesaurus to get the right verb
Step 4: Rewrite
- Read all your captions. Same=BORING.
- Rewrite a few to improve your spread.
Step 5: Proofread
- Ask other teachers, parents, classmates.
- Have more than one person read it.
Step 6: Make corrections
- Review copy and make necessary corrections to fix any errors that may have occurred.
- Review suggestions to see if they improve your copy.
Successful captions
- ABCD
- Attention getter - mini headline, needs to be good
- Base Info - 5W’s and H
- Complimentary info - something you can’t see in the picture (statistics)
- Direct quote - from some in the picture
- Active verb (no ing)
- Third person
Writing headlines
- Need subheading
- No punctuation and sentence case (first letter capital, unless proper noun)
Successful headlines
- Active verb
- (Noun > Verb > Noun)
Assignment
- Dissect a good caption/photo and with ABCD format.
- Turn a bad caption good.