Unit 5: Writing Recap

Lesson 1: Interviews and recording notes

Step 1: Prepare

  • Research
  • Develop questions.
  • 5Ws and H

Step 2: Develop questions

  • Write down questions.
  • Avoid YES/NO, general, leading, and feel questions

Step 3: Interview time

  • Have a conversation and take notes on everything.
  • Observe the room/setting you are in (put it in your notes)

Step 4: Take notes

  • Audio recordings will work, but also take notes. Sometimes audio is hard to hear and transcribe.
  • Direct quotes are the only thing you need to write word for word.
  • Summarize other stuff.

Step 5: Make it a conversation

  • Follow the path your questions mapped out.
  • You can ask stuff not on your paper.
  • If you hear something of importance that you did not consider right it done.
  • Mark ALL important info

Step 6: Keep it fresh

  • Transcribe while fresh in your mind
  • Prepare to write while your notes are still fresh.

Assignment: Prepare Research

  • Identify a story you are assigned to write for the yearbook.
  • Decide who the sources for the story will be and list them.
  • Then, write down what background research you will do.

Lesson 2: Writing copy and sidebars

Step 1: Find your story

  • Focus on people
  • Brainstorm ideas
  • Talk to your peers, teammates, classmates, teachers
  • Look at sample books

Step 2: Research

  • Online, newspaper, statistic books, coaches, teachers, attend event

Step 3: Interview

  • Be selective not convenient

Step 4: Write

  • Freewrite in a word doc to get started

Step 5: Rewrite

  • Read your freewrite, and then clean it up.
  • Reorganize it for better flow, delete repetitive information.

Step 6: Proofread

Step 7: Make Corrections

Successful body

  • Passive verbs
  • Use quotes to accent the story. Quotes are not the story.
  • Third person
  • Use fewer words. DO NOT RAMBLE TO MAKE YOUR STORY LONGER!

The rest of the story

  • Secondary coverage or sidebars allow yearbook staffs to combine design, graphics and words to present information in a visually interesting way. (see lesson 6 in PPT)

Assignment:

  • Fill out spread planners (focus on angle and secondary coverage ideas).
  • Select an angle, if you can, and start your research while the editor approves your plan

Lesson 3: Writing captions and headlines

Step 1: Select pictures

  • BE PICKY, not convenient and get them approved.

Step 2: Research and Interview

  • What is going on in the picture?
  • Who are the people? Talk to the people, they love to share their story and talk about themselves.

Step 3: Write

  • Use a thesaurus to get the right verb

Step 4: Rewrite

  • Read all your captions. Same=BORING.
  • Rewrite a few to improve your spread.

Step 5: Proofread

  • Ask other teachers, parents, classmates.
  • Have more than one person read it.

Step 6: Make corrections

  • Review copy and make necessary corrections to fix any errors that may have occurred.
  • Review suggestions to see if they improve your copy.

Successful captions

  • ABCD
  • Attention getter - mini headline, needs to be good
  • Base Info - 5W’s and H
  • Complimentary info - something you can’t see in the picture (statistics)
  • Direct quote - from some in the picture
  • Active verb (no ing)
  • Third person

Writing headlines

  • Need subheading
  • No punctuation and sentence case (first letter capital, unless proper noun)

Successful headlines

  • Active verb
  • (Noun > Verb > Noun)

Assignment

  • Dissect a good caption/photo and with ABCD format.
  • Turn a bad caption good.