Editing and Re-Crafting

Have you given your audience enough information about what you are doing?

Have you written events in order?

Have you got a great final conclusion to finish off your story?

Read through your writing and underline ANY words you think that may be mispelled.

Highlight any sentences that don't make sense in yellow. Share with a partner and try to re-write them so that they do make sense.

Highlight at least one sentence blue that you could add more detail to. Add more detail, without adding too much information.

Fix full stops, capital letters and try to add in commas.

Are there any sentences that you could begin in a much more interesting way.

For example: - replacing "Then I", "After that", "We were",

Could you use one of these ideas:

Verb ending in ing

Adverb

Adverbial Clause