EE Reflection: Criterion E - Engagement
The EE Reflection
The IB encourages students to reflect throughout the research process - not just at the end after your paper is finished!
You will meet with your supervisor a number of times while you are working on your EE, for a total of 3 to 5 hours. Three of those sessions will be "reflection sessions", meaning that following these meetings you will be required to submit a 150-175 word reflection on the research and writing process of your EE to the EE Coordinator. Your reflection can not exceed 500 words and will be submitted to IB by the IB Coordinator, using the Reflections on Planning and Progress Form (RPPF).
Your three reflections will count for 19% of your final EE grade from the IB examiner.
One way to help with your reflection is to ask yourself questions. Your answers will help you identify any problems, so you can then find ways to solve them. See the page in this section:
Reflection is a continual process. If you are constantly considering the decisions you are making in the extended essay (EE) process, you are better able to avoid the common pitfalls of independent research. Reflection also helps you plan, allowing you to monitor your progress.
The Reflections on planning and progress form (RPPF) enables examiners to gain an insight into students’ thinking processes while researching and writing the EE. The examiners are looking to see how students’ thinking and skills have developed during this time
The Extended Essay Criteria
Criterion E
Levels of Reflection
Poor
What did I do?
How did I undertake my research?
What were the problems I faced?
Did my approach or strategies change throughout the process?
What have been the high and the low points of the research and writing process?
Good
Was my research successful?
If I changed my approach or strategies during the process, why did I do this?
What did I learn from the experience in terms of my understanding of the subject area and/or the skills needed to undertake research?
How has my understanding of the topic and research process developed throughout the task?
Excellent
If I were to undertake this research again, would I do it differently—if so, why or why not?What has affected this?
If I did do the research again, would I change the theories applied or the methodological approach? Would this have led to a different outcome?
What can I conclude from this?
Were the strategies I used for undertaking my research the most appropriate for achieving my outcomes?
What, if any, questions emerged as a result of my research that I was not expecting? Would these questions influence my approach if I were to undertake the research again?
Reflection 1
Initial Stage
This will be after one of the early sessions with your supervisor where you outline:
Your ideas regarding the topic in general
The research question you have in mind
Initial background reading or research you may have conducted
Possible approaches
Initial thoughts about the answer to your research question
Roughly 100 words in length
Guiding Questions:
What exactly do you want to find out?
What resources do you plan to use?
What problems do you anticipate in your research?
What writing and research have you done since last session?
Have you found any sources with conflicting viewpoints?
Have you been able to find relevant sources from different eras?
What challenges did you encounter in finding relevant sources?
How do you think you might use your sources?
Have you collected sufficient data?
Have you finished note taking from your text?
What am I interested in researching and why?
What are my motivations for undertaking research in this area?
How will I begin the research process?
Is my chosen topic appropriate for the subject I have chosen to complete it in?
Do I have sufficient knowledge of the subject area to fulfill the criteria of an EE?
What possible question(s) might I research?
How might I go about undertaking this research?
Do I have access to appropriate sources?
Are my chosen research methods appropriate for the subject I have chosen to complete it in?
Are there any ethical issues I need to consider before pursuing this area of research?
Is there sufficient focus to my research area?
Reflection 2
Interim Stage
This reflection session will usually fall somewhere in the middle to latter half of your EE process, usually before the first draft is completed.
Discuss how the research question has become more refined.
Comment on any challenges you have encountered & what solutions you have attempted.
Discuss how your thinking on your topic has evolved.
Roughly 200 words in length
Guiding Questions:
Where was I? Where I am now? Where am I going?
What sources do you find helpful?
How have you evaluated your sources?
Have you adopted a structure for writing based on what the IB requires?
What do you need to do next? Do I have sufficient data/information to begin formulating an argument?
If I do not have sufficient data/information, how will I go about resolving this? Can it be resolved?
To what extent does the data/information I have relate to my proposed research question?
Given the data/information I have collected, do I need to reformulate my research question?
Has the data/information collected taken me in an unexpected direction?
Do I want to change course now? Is it too late?
Are there still questions/issues that I am unclear how to resolve?
Am I keeping to a schedule with the writing process?
Reflection 3
Looking Back
This final reflection should be written BEFORE the Viva Voce meeting. It should:
Offer your final reflections on the process
Discuss any achievements realized or challenges overcome
Discuss elements that allowed you to complete the task that may not be readily apparent in the essay itself.
Discuss any relevant ATL's (Approaches to Learning) that you have developed through the process & be ready to provide good examples.
Roughly 200 words in length
Guiding Questions
What did you discover that surprised you?
Is writing the EE mainly about process or product AND why?
What would you have done differently and why?
What advice would you give to a student just beginning this process?
What have been the high and low points of the research and writing processes?
What would you have done differently?
What is the most important thing that you learned?
What was your greatest challenge and how did you overcome it?
What would you change if you did another EE?
What was the most valuable experience that you took away from the process?
What was your greatest challenge and what did you do to overcome it?
What IB learner profile attribute would you say helped you through the process (communicator, risk-taker, etc.)?
Would you like to continue reading on this topic?
What questions did this process raise?
What conclusions have you drawn about the topic?
Example 1
First Reflection - History
I was attracted to Anna Comnena's The Alexiad as a result of some extra readings which formed part of my IB History course (Crusades). As the first female historian, she stands in a unique place in terms of historiography, something which appealed to me as both a woman and budding historian. I was initially considering writing about her accounts of the First Crusade but quickly found the topic to be far too wide in scope. A reading of Paul Magdalino's article "The Pen of the Aunt" helped refocus me on the issue of historical purpose, i.e., why she wrote the history she did. I have now allocated time to reading historical accounts of Manuel I's reign to decide how closely the events Anna mentions in her history of her father's reign (Alexius) so as to validate my current hypothesis- that Anna intended the work as a celebratory account of her father so as to cast a negative light on the rule of her nephew Manuel I. My current list includes Runciman, France, Macrides, Christomides, and Hill.
Example 2
Interim Reflection
I was finding it hard to come up with a satisfactory counter to the question of accuracy and authenticity which feature prominently in modern readings of her work. Historians ranging from Edward Gibbon and John France to the more direct Howard-Johnson paper which completely challenges her authorship effectively negated my hypothesis entirely. Using Magdalino and Hill as a focus point, I re-read key sections of The Alexiad and mapped out her account against the policital events of Manuel I's reign and quickly discovered some interesting overlaps (building works, military campaigns, relations with the West, etc.). Though occasionally obscure and subtle, the criticisms emerge by means of an unspoken comparison which Byzantine readers of her account would have well understood. This approach is providing me with a suitable counter to the aforementioned criticisms. I have also begun structuring my work accordingly with sections devoted to historical context followed by a section on The Alexiad which compares and contrasts events from Alexius' time with those of Manuel's. I am considering a chapter on the historiographical tradition of Byzantium but may integrate it into the main body in the end.
Example 3
Final Reflection
I am very pleased with how the essay has turned out. Skills wise, I had no problems with referencing which I picked up quickly though integrating source analysis did prove a challenge at times due to my narrative tendencies. I believe I've been able to challenge the orthodox interpretations of Anna's work as a piece of fantasy fiction at the hands of a disgruntled woman by showing that Anna was effectively using one of the few weapons still permitted her in her diminished political state- the power of words- to criticize the existing leadership. Hill's works proved of particular use to me as they examined female power in a broader context and thus gave me a framework for interpreting what Anna was able to do within the context of her time.
IB Examplars
Literature
https://libguides.westsoundacademy.org/ld.php?content_id=28691735
History
https://libguides.westsoundacademy.org/ld.php?content_id=28691737
World Studies
https://libguides.westsoundacademy.org/ld.php?content_id=28691739
Biology
https://libguides.westsoundacademy.org/ld.php?content_id=28691740
The Viva Voce
What is the viva voce?
The viva voce is a short conference between the student and the supervisor. It is the recommended conclusion to the Extended Essay process, and lasts between 10 and 15 minutes.
Why have the viva voce?
The EE supervisor is required to submit a report when your EE is shipped to the IB examiner has been assigned to grade it. The supervisor can ask questions in the viva voce that will help with writing that report. This is especially important if the supervisor feels there is a need to check for plagiarism and malpractice in general. Supervisors are required to confirm the authenticity of the work in any Extended Essay submitted to IB.
The supervisor will use the viva voce to help you:
Reflect on the successes and difficulties you had when researching and writing your essay
Reflect on what you have learned
What questions will be asked in the viva voce?
Here are some examples of questions you might be asked:
What have been the high and low points of the research and writing process?
In hindsight, would you choose the topic again?
What were the most interesting aspects of the process? Did you discover anything that surprised you?
What have you learned through writing this essay?
Having finished your essay, what additional questions did you find that could lead to further investigation?
Is there any advice you could pass on to someone who has just started work on their EE?