Weekly Live Check-Ins—dedicated 1-on-1 phone call (or video call or back-and-forth emailing) part of monthly retainer calls to address any roadblocks, brainstorm plot direction and rework your outline.
Ongoing Page Reviews—weekly analysis new or revised work so you get continuous feedback while you write.
Direct Email Access—ongoing asynchronous email support between sessions for quick questions, character development ideas, or sudden plot epiphanies.
Actionable Goals & Feedback—clear weekly assignments and tailored nots to ensure every chapter serves your overall vision for you manuscript.
Monthly Coaching Retainer: $~400/month (depending on depth and complexity of the project).
Extensive letter with an analysis of your work (no in-text comments). This will detail what elements need work and sections I think you worked wonderfully on. I will relate big-picture issues to specific examples so you know where to start.
Investment starts at $0.01/wd.
50% of your total bill is required upon scheduling, and the remainder is due upon completion.
Take a look at my project workflow for an idea of how things will trickle down (from inquiry to completion).
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What's the difference between a manuscript critique and a developmental edit?
Think about going to a fast food joint and deciding whether you want to just grab a quick bite, maybe you want just the burger, or rather you're starving and you want the combo meal!
Beta Reading (Standard / Plus) is like grabbing a bite from the Value Menu. It’s quick, budget-friendly, and gives you a great baseline taste of how everyday customers (your target readers) react to the food. It tells you if the burger tastes good, but it won’t give you a master chef's recipe to fix it.
A Manuscript Critique is ordering just the burger off the premium menu. It’s an expert, technical evaluation from a professional editor. You get a high-level diagnostic breakdown of the ingredients—knowing exactly what major things are missing or what should be addressed to make it a gourmet meal, but you're still left to put the extra toppings together yourself.
A Developmental Edit is the combo meal. This satisfies you completely. You get the premium burger, the sides, and the drink. Not only do I give you the extensive structural blueprint of what needs fixing, but I also dive straight into the document wrappers with deep, inline developmental coaching to help you physically cook, reshape, and perfect the entire story from the inside out.
One pass of your entire document
In-text comments noting moments of opportunity or moments of excellence
Extensive letter that puts all my comments into context. The letter will describe what major things should be addressed and why. I will also provide a chapter-by-chapter breakdown by examining your novel's structure.
Investment starts at $0.03/wd.
50% of your total bill is required upon scheduling, and the balance is due upon completion.
You can request an additional round of review after you have made your changes per my suggestions for an extra charge.
Take a look at my project workflow for an idea of how things will trickle down (from inquiry to completion).
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What's the difference between a manuscript critique and a developmental edit?
Think about going to a fast food joint and deciding whether you want to just grab a quick bite, maybe you want just the burger, or rather you're starving and you want the combo meal!
Beta Reading (Standard / Plus) is like grabbing a bite from the Value Menu. It’s quick, budget-friendly, and gives you a great baseline taste of how everyday customers (your target readers) react to the food. It tells you if the burger tastes good, but it won’t give you a master chef's recipe to fix it.
A Manuscript Critique is ordering just the burger off the premium menu. It’s an expert, technical evaluation from a professional editor. You get a high-level diagnostic breakdown of the ingredients—knowing exactly what major things are missing or what should be addressed to make it a gourmet meal, but you're still left to put the extra toppings together yourself.
A Developmental Edit is the combo meal. This satisfies you completely. You get the premium burger, the sides, and the drink. Not only do I give you the extensive structural blueprint of what needs fixing, but I also dive straight into the document wrappers with deep, inline developmental coaching to help you physically cook, reshape, and perfect the entire story from the inside out.
I will read your entire manuscript through the eyes of your target audience to see how your story flows, where the tension grips, and where a reader might get lost. You will come away with a clear understanding of your book's pacing, plot holes, and overall audience appeal.
Standard Beta Read: Includes a complete pass of your entire manuscript and an extensive, structured reader's report answering your specific burning questions (e.g., pacing, plot holes, character likability, and structural flow).
Beta Read "Plus": Includes the comprehensive reader's report plus live, inline reader reactions directly in the document margins (e.g., "This joke cracked me up!" or "I'm getting confused about who is speaking here").
Standard—$150
Plus—$240
Larger manuscripts over 90,000 words incur an additional $15 per 10,000 words over the cap.
For projects charged over $200, 50% of your total bill is required upon scheduling, and the balance is due upon completion. Projects under $200, your total bill is required upon scheduling.
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What's the difference between beta reading, manuscript critique, and a developmental edit?
Think about going to a fast food joint and deciding whether you want to just grab a quick bite, maybe you want just the burger, or rather you're starving and you want the combo meal!
Beta Reading (Standard / Plus) is like grabbing a bite from the Value Menu. It’s quick, budget-friendly, and gives you a great baseline taste of how everyday customers (your target readers) react to the food. It tells you if the burger tastes good, but it won’t give you a master chef's recipe to fix it.
A Manuscript Critique is ordering just the burger off the premium menu. It’s an expert, technical evaluation from a professional editor. You get a high-level diagnostic breakdown of the ingredients—knowing exactly what major things are missing or what should be addressed to make it a gourmet meal, but you're still left to put the extra toppings together yourself.
A Developmental Edit is the combo meal. This satisfies you completely. You get the premium burger, the sides, and the drink. Not only do I give you the extensive structural blueprint of what needs fixing, but I also dive straight into the document wrappers with deep, inline developmental coaching to help you physically cook, reshape, and perfect the entire story from the inside out.
Two passes of line and copyediting for your entire document
In-text feedback
Custom editorial report with an explanation of edits
Detailed style sheet
Investment starts at $0.02/wd.
25% of your total bill is required upon scheduling, 40% is due after completing the first pass, and the balance is due upon completion of the second pass.
You can request an additional round of review after you have made your changes per my suggestions for an extra charge.
Take a look at my project workflow for an idea of how things will trickle down (from inquiry to completion).
One pass proofreading of your entire document
In-text comments
Custom style sheet
Custom editorial report with an explanation of edits