They wanted a room and an outdoor scene. I changed these drawings many times because of composition and perspective issues. I don't know why I got what I got in this section. Maybe it's the lack of the sense of perspective? There are more successful drawings from others you can reference haha! But one thing I've been told, is that you should always try to incorporate a storytelling aspect to it. Since this is the animation program, you want to show them you do visual storytelling. Yes I have seen a pure perspective drawing get 15/15. But adding the couple of characters definitely won't hurt your score. Besides, if I didn't do what I did, these scenes would be very boring (which is probably why I got a lower score. The characters are the stars of the piece, not the layout) I was told the instructors are used to seeing layouts at 16:9 ratio. Ditch the letter paper here. 16:9 does look generally better.
These layouts in Bobby's portfolio is something else. 14/15 but they're incredibly rendered. Line quality is amazing.
Line quality is shown when your lines are confident and closer objects have darker and thicker lines, then they get lighter/thinner as objects recede.
You're being marked on: Line qality, proportion, structure, perspective, composition