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It is irrefutable that cultural traditions attract lure from all over the world and develop local economy. Some individuals are of the opinion that these may be destroyed if they are modified to attract tourists. Others, however, hold the view that if we don't use them for tourism, these cultural attractions will die. ln the following paragraphs, I shall discuss both sides of the argument. l, personally side with the latter view.
We have to make these cultural traditions alluring for tourists, because we need tourists. Firstly, tourism boosts our economy and secondly, we get a chance to spread our culture to different countries. lf our artists and artisans do not earn money from their art, which depicts our culture and tradition, then this art will die off and we'll only be the losers.
Tourism is the backbone of any count4/s economy and every country does its effort to attract tourists. Many people depend on tourism for their livelihood. People in the food industry hotel industry and transport industry depend on tourism. Presentation is very important to attract visitors, and to present nicely some change is unavoidable.
On the other hand, when cultural traditions are used as money-making attractions, they lose their original features. Sometimes it makes cultural traditions disappear altogether. However, I believe that culture and tradition are deep rooted and minor superficial changes cannot harm them in any way. Change is the law of nature and all we should look into it that the changes are made with caution to retain the inherent elements of culture.
Summing up, to save cultural traditions we need to make some changes to make them captivating to the tourist of today. lf we don't do so we'll lose our cultural traditions altogether and we'll lose our tourists also.
PLAN FOLLOWED
lntro: Discuss essay intro
Para 1: Why we should use cultural attractions for making money
Para 2: More advantages of tourism
Para 3: Disadvantages of using cultural attractions as money-making ventures
Conclusion: to save cultural traditions we need to make some changes to make them