In the above comment, I suggested adding more information on how to download the application. I thought this could help make her presentation even better because it would provide more details.
In the above comment, I suggested adding information about the extra features included in a paid subscription. I think this could improve the presentation because viewers would have a better understanding to decide whether or not they want to pay for a subscription.
In the above comment, I suggested including a cheaper alternative for people that can't afford the subscription fee. I think this could improve the presentation because viewers have more options and can decide which tool best fits their needs.