For each sub-question, read all the quotes that will be used to answer it and formulate a single sentence answer to the question.
These single-sentence answers will then become the topic sentences or Points in a PEEL paragraph.
A topic sentence is a single sentence which appears as the first sentence of a body paragraph that states the main argument of that paragraph.
A good Topic Sentence answers one of your sub-questions.
After you have sorted all of your notes and quotes according to the sub-questions they answer, you can start answering each sub-questions.
Your answer to each of your sub-questions will become your Topic Sentences.
Step 1:
Read your first sub-question again, in order to remind yourself what the question was asking.
Step 2:
Read all of the notes and quotes that you said helped answer sub-question1.
Step 3:
Using the information from those notes and quotes, write a single sentence answer to the question. This single-sentence answer will then become your first Topic Sentence.
Step 4:
Repeat the process above for the other two sub-questions until you have a Topic Sentence for each of your sub-questions.
What caused medieval castles to fall into disuse?
Castles became obsolete with the invention and improvement of gunpowder-based artillery (Hull, 2004, 33)
"Castles took years to build and, when new canon technology could destroy a fortification in a matter of days, they were no longer feasible" (Alchin, 2017, n.p.)
The development of modern artillery meant that attackers could destroy castles from a distance, which removed any advantage that defenders gained from their stone walls (Norris, 2007, 249)
Castles fell into disuse as a result of the development of gunpowder artillery because the new technology took away the advantages the defenders had enjoyed.
CAUSE - development of gunpowder artillery eroded the advantages provided to those in a defence position.
EFFECT - castles fell into disuse.
1. Does the Topic Sentence directly answer the sub-question?
Read the sub-question again and then the Topic Sentence. If the Topic Sentence directly answers the question, it is a good Topic Sentence.
2. Does the Topic Sentence provide specific details to answer the question - and use a cause and effect structure.
A good Topic Sentence uses a cause and effect structure that gives specific information to answer the question. The is usually preceded by words such as "because", "due to", or "as a result of".