Ekphrastic
Just Write! Wilmington Fantastic Ekphrastic Poetry: UD Associate in Arts, First State Squash and Delaware Art Museum
In the Spring of 2020, five Leadership students at the University of Delaware Associate in Arts Program began planning an illustrated anthology of creative writing composed by the middle- and high-school students of First State Squash as part of the Just Write! Wilmington initiative. The UD students were Tavon Gage, Naya Ugorji, Olivia Scalora, Emily Myers, and Josiah Jones. They were mentored by the Academic Director of First State Squash, Ami Patel, who is herself a graduate of the UD Associate in Arts Program and of UD, and Owen Butler, Executive Director of First State Squash.
The advent of the COVID-19 epidemic put the Just Write! project in jeopardy, but it also presented an opportunity to reconsider, reorganize, and take a new direction.
Analyzing resources at hand, the UD/FSS team identified the online collections of the Delaware Art Museum as a virtually-available asset. Assisted by Eliza Jarvis and Saralyn Rosenfeld of the museum, the UD/FSS team selected three works of art to use as subjects for an ekphrastic poetry project.
By choosing the technique of ekphrastia, which is taken here to mean writing a poem about a work of art, the collaborative team solved the problem of coordinating with an illustrator during quarantine: the illustrations would already be done.
The particular genre of poems the team opted to use are known as Cinquain and Diamante. Both are short, clearly-defined structures that ask writers to master syllabification, parts of speech, and strategic word-choice in addition to traditional poetic concepts such as rhythm, diction, imagery, and figurative language.
Over weeks of preparation, the Ekphrastia team constructed lesson plans to be delivered online to FSS students in their homes. FSS proved to be a spectacular partner. The relationships between FSS staff and their students are strong and their organizational proficiency is high. Thus the team could assume that, once they had created viable online learning tools, they would be able to use these tools to deliver content to students.
Additionally, it bears noting that Ami Patel provided invaluable mentoring in the art of creating lesson plans.
The team built up to the actual session for composing poetry over the course of three lessons. Using Zoom, Google Classroom, and Nearpod, they prepared FSS students by focusing on their relationships with visual art, by helping them develop the vocabulary to talk about it, and by exploring how language captures such abstract concepts as personal relationships and emotion.
Working in Zoom breakout rooms accompanied by UD and FSS instructors and staff, UD students led lessons designed to scaffold the skills necessary to successfully write poems about art. FSS students discussed their favorite words and created their own “word clouds,” which became the basis for the diction they employed in their actual poems. Breakout groups discussed the works of art in question, “Crying Giant” by Tom Otterness, “Marooned,” by Howard Pyle, and “Cherry Island” by Hank Willis Thomas, and created possible narratives and historical contexts to surround them.
On the third meeting day, FSS students and their UD mentors began composing poetry. Employing a different approach in each breakout group, some composed on a Zoom whiteboard, some composed on a separate Googledoc, and some wrote on paper at home and read their pieces aloud.
On Tuesday, May 12, FSS students presented their poems:
Enormous
Colossal, Immense
Crying, Terrifying, Mystifying
Upset, Tall, Blue, Skinny
Surprising, Solving, Satisfying
Relieved, Happy
Gargantuan
--Peighton
Giant
Blue, Tall
Crying, Sitting, Wondering
Backyard, Trashcan, Grass, Cloud
Thinking, Seeing, Picturing
Huge, Big
Museum
--Kendrick
Book
afraid, worried
commanding, tiring, exhausting
interesting, inspiring, playful, hyper
stimulating, invigorating, activizing
teasing, joy
energized
--Solomon
Sadness
Blue, Alone
Depressing, Unwilling, Saddening
Hate, Feelings, Iron, Steel
Rusting, Standing, Decaying
Massive, Gargantuan
Metal
--Vincent
Sadness
gloomy, sorrow
crying, grieving, mourning
heartbreak, desolate, frustrated, exasperated
melancholy
--Aniyah
Giant
Isolated, Rejected
Nodding, Sitting, Crying
He is very unhappy
Colossus
--Riley
Crying giant
stressed and puzzled,
ashamed for being big,
depressed because he had no friends,
sobbing monster.
--Kamori
Giant
sad, lonely
depressing, tiring, hurting
heartbroken, down, joyful, cheerful
pleasing, thrilling, laughing
glad, playful
happy
--Jah’mere
Men
Creative, intelligent
Hardworking, inspiring, interesting, interesting
Enthusiastic, helpful, worthless, disagreeable
Displeasing, troubling, loathing
Undesirable, obnoxious
unpleasant
--Mimi