Purpose:
Many authors frequently use loose sentences to draw attention to and validate their argument. The unusual length of the sentence may throw the audience for a loop, but in reality adds context and color. Some would argue that this conventional way of writing is realistic and relatable as those living day-to-day, typically do not speak in a formal order, but rather in a distorted ; elongated way. The author might use a loose sentence structure to gain a connection with the reader, as it makes the content more accessible.
Generally, loose sentences could be used in many different scenarios, however, it would be most ideal when describing something vividly. The reader may want to think of it as if they are talking to a friend. Teachers often say ‘do not write as you speak’ , however, a loose sentence is structured in the same way that most would structure anything that comes out of their mouths in a casual setting, aside from the diction that may be used. Loose sentences allow for more descriptive writing.
Steps for Analysis:
Identify the loose sentence, through the chaotic and/or dense writing.
Note: These sentences have ample places to place a period.
Direct your primary focus to the purpose of the sentence.
What is the author trying to convey?
What type of information is typically used in loose sentences?
Consider the position of the sentence within the piece of writing. Why might the author be using a loose sentence structure?
How is the subject conveyed in a loose sentence structure?
Example from ‘Freedom From Fear’(1990) By: Aung San Suu Kyi
"Fearlessness may be a gift but perhaps more precious is the courage acquired through endeavor, courage that comes from cultivating the habit of refusing to let fear dictate one’s actions, courage that could be described as ‘grace under pressure’-grace which is renewed repeatedly in the face of harsh, unremitting pressure."
Analysis of Passage:
Aung San Suu Kyi, a ‘woman of destiny’, has been an inspiration to many. Aung was held under house arrest in Burma, Myanmar for 15 years. Since then her fight for political activism has been greater than ever. After accepting the Sakharov Prize for Freedom in 1990, she conveyed the now-famous speech. This particular section of her speech is elongated. Aung speaks about how fearlessness and courage are intertwined and does so by elaborating the main idea, creating a loose sentence. Aung could have stopped the sentence after the word ‘endeavor’ , but then her point would not have been the same, essentially minimizing the importance of her words.
People, like Aung, use loose sentences to convey a sense of importance, to create engagement. Unlike a run-on sentence, these sentences are longer, and most likely include key information. Allowing the audience to engage and feel the depth of the words. The use of a loose sentence was especially key here, as she preaches bravery, compassion and conviction, saying that is something that everyone should hold onto. Aung’s initial use of a loose sentence, would tie her speech together and inspire many others to speak up about abuse that they might face.
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