Draft 1

Your essay......

blah-blah

The End of your essay.

Peer Partner:

Using a different color, type your comments:

Whate were the sources used in the paper? (there should be at least 3)

Were they cited correctly SUCH AS (Lorde 43) and (Young)Was the introduction interesting? Was it effective? Was the thesis stated well?

Did the essay make sense? Was it logical?

What was the problem about which your partner was writing?

Was the essay written well? Was it interesting to read or was it boring?

Was a variety of styles used for the citations? Or was the same style used over and over?

What suggestions do you have to "kick it up a notch"?

Did your partner's argument convincing? Did you to understand the reasoning? Do you think they are correct?

Was the essay written with passion?

Did the arguments make sense?

Spelling errors?

Grammatical errors?

Does the essay appear to be about 90% completed?