College Essays

Almost all colleges & universities require applicants to submit either a personal statement or short answer essay(s). Sometimes the college provides specific guidelines in terms of topic, length, and even format; while other times the prompt may be as general as “Tell us something about you.” But for all schools, the essay is a significant part of the application, it allows the reader to know what’s important to you, how you think about things, and who you are as a person. Be sure the essay or personal statement you submit represents your very best work. 

It is very important that the essay you submit is your own work. Be original! 

APPLICATION ESSAY PROMPTS

THE COMMON APPLICATION 

More than 800 member institutions. Common Application essay prompts are often released as early as January of the student's junior year of high school. Word limit of 650 words.

COALITION APPLICATION 

More than 140 member institutions. Includes University of Washington and overlaps with many Common App Schools.

Per Coalition: “recommend that you aim for 500 to 550 words

SUPPLEMENTAL QUESTIONS

Supplemental essays often focus on college-specific questions. Why us? What qualities of the college/university make it a good fit for the student applying?


Carnegie Mellon University: Please submit a one-page, single‐spaced essay that explains why you have chosen Carnegie Mellon and your particular major(s), department(s) or program(s). This essay should include the reasons why you’ve chosen the major(s), any goals or relevant work plans and any other information you would like us to know. For freshmen applying to more than one college or program, please mention each college or program to which you are applying. Because our admission committees review applicants by college and program, your essay can impact our final decision.

Diversity is a buzz word on many college campuses and often a topic to be covered in a college application. Students should be prepared for this.


University of Washington: Our families and communities often define us and our individual worlds. Community might refer to your cultural group, extended family, religious group, neighborhood or school, sports team or club, co‐workers, etc. Describe the world you come from and how you, as a product of it, might add to the diversity of the University of Washington.

ESSAY COMPONENTS

ESSAY BE YOU!

DO write an Essay that no one else can write!

Good writing can make any story unique

Essays are where virtually all qualified-but-rejected students fall short!

ESSAY TYPES

Narrative

Lead/Topic, back-story/incident, what happened/climax of the story, reflection/“Aha moment”, outcome/circle back to intro/yet link to the future

Montage

Use multiple moments/images to frame story, use a ‘focusing lens’/metaphor to highlight key points (e.g. a sport, place, hobby, art form)

ESSAY "Do"s and "Don't"s

ESSAY "DO"s

ESSAY "DON'T"S

ESSAY  TIPS

IS THOUGHTFUL AND HONEST

A strong personal statement is reflective; that is, it demonstrates that you have thought about and gained a clear perspective on your experiences and what you want in your future. It does not simply tell a reader what you think he/she wants to know. Instead, it gives the reader a vivid and compelling picture of you--in essence, telling the reader what he or she should know about you. Remember that the focus of the essay is YOU--your achievements, your obstacles, your goals, your values.

Tip is from UC - Berkeley

STRIVES FOR DEPTH, NOT BREADTH

A good essay is not a list of your accomplishments. Remember when your mom told you that it's quality, not quantity that counts? Well, the same adage applies for your college essay. A reader will be much more interested in how your experience demonstrates the theme of your essay, not the number of accomplishments you can list. What is NOT interesting: an essay that devotes one paragraph each to a variety of different topics. This type of approach denies you the ability to give depth to your essay.

Tip is from UC - Berkeley

ANSWERS THE QUESTION!

A good essay is the result of a writer who has examined the essay question and written an essay that explicitly addresses that question. For example, if you are asked to describe your greatest accomplishment or any unusual circumstances or challenges you have faced, then your reader will expect you to use vivid language that will enable the reader to visualize your accomplishment and share your sense of success. 

Tip is from UC - Berkeley

TRANSFORMS BLEMISHES INTO POSITIVES

It's okay to have flaws! The essay is your chance to show how you have transformed blemishes. For example, if your essay theme is "overcoming obstacles" and you earned a poor grade in a class, but went to a community college at night to repeat the course, it is important for your reader to know this because it is an example of your perseverance. The reader does not want to hear complaints about poor grades or circumstances, but rather wants to know how you have overcome them. 

Tip is from UC - Berkeley

DEMONSTRATES YOUR KNOWLEDGE

Demonstrate your knowledge of the college or major -  No one expects you to know everything about the college or university to which you are applying. However, readers will want to know that you have done your homework. For example, if you write an essay that states your interest in becoming an engineer, but the college does not have an engineering program, then you haven't done your homework. 

Tip is from UC - Berkeley

EXUDES CONFIDENCE

Exude Confidence ...You will be successful no matter what! - A good essay doesn't beg or brag. Colleges and universities want to admit the best students, and the best students are those who can demonstrate their ability to pursue their goals regardless of where they are admitted. Think of this as quiet confidence--the kind that reveals itself through your description of lifelong interests, sustained commitment, and/or perseverance in the face of adversity. 

Tip is from UC - Berkeley

ADDITIONAL RESOURCES

Five Overused College Essay Topics

Five-Overused-Essays.pdf

How Not to Start a College Essay

How-Not-to-Start-an-Essay.pdf

U.C. Admissions Writing Tips

Writing tips _ UC Admissions.pdf