On the following subpages, you will be able to view samples of student work that I have assessed. In my comments, I try to focus on the positive aspects of each student's work so they are able to confirm their strengths and utilize these abilities in the future.When recognizing areas of improvement I try to emphasize a few key points for each student to focus on. Recognizing several central points, rather than many, allows students to understand these challenges and grow to improve these areas in the future. I hope to make revision a key aspect of learning in my classroom as I encourage each student to reach their greatest potential.